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Tinkering With Life (GoT SI) Chapter - 25

🕑 Added 2023-03-08 21:00:38 +0000 UTC

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Ouki's Lips

I'm really liking this so far. But I think maybe a time skip is in order. Maybe make a time skip to canon after he heals Tyrion. It'd be cool to see a swift juxtaposition between the normal forest before he settles there and the fantasy-like forest that's sure to result from his tinkering.

JO LP

Even if a person can consciously control their biology to the point of manipulating their emotions through brain chemistry. Applying such techniques all the time just sounds exhausting.

Eldon Fernandes

Thank you very much. Life can become very boring if you keep your emotions bottled up. The next chapter will mostly focus on the protagonist's relationship with Freya, so stay tuned for that.

El_S

Still good chapter. I'm really curious of his relationship with Freya. And you know I get the felling that your MC is going to name himself Odin, all he needs is a pair of ravens, his sleepinir, and his beautiful spear gungnir( the whole package, I don't know why I wrote that)

El_S

For a guy that can Control his biology he sure gets led a lot by his emotions


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