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Tinkering With Life (GoT SI) Chapter - 17

🕑 Added 2023-02-11 13:42:05 +0000 UTC

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Eldon Fernandes

I understand what you mean. Originally, I had him leaving the capital in this chapter, but the King's Landing arc felt a little too fast for me. I had the first half of this chapter lying around while I was trying to check if writing smut was harder than writing normal stuff. So, I thought I might as well end on an unexpected note, which wouldn't really affect the broader story I had in mind very much. You also bring up valid concerns, which I'll address in the next chapter.

El_S

I really hope you don't use the stupid excuse that he forgot to check if he left her pregnant, it would really ruin the story. And I would think that the MC would have the good sense to not fuck Cersei in the castle when its known by every SI, that the walls have ears. Yeah the decision is definitely stupid. He could have every type of girl but he goes to the crazy and problematic one.

El_S

Yeah I'm the same. This seems just a stupid excuse to just fuck Cersei. I mean someone with the ability to control his biology shouldn't be controlled by his instincts. If he just said he wanted to fuck her, I would understand, but saying he couldn't control himself sound a stupid excuse.

CaptainYumYum12

damn I feel bad for the assistant girl who obviously likes the mc


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