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A Hunter of... Hearts?

🕑 Added 2023-09-24 16:15:37 +0000 UTC

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Chalino

It would be amazing to read if it’s well done and not shoehorned in. I’d be wiling to read most things but one actual dealbreaker is harems, please god no harems i beg

LiAndo

When it's done right it's fantastic. It is a hard one to do right. One that I saw that was really well done was Red Thorn (not to say do it that way, but maybe there is some inspiration there?). There was a lot of building up to a good relationship, and while it was a main part of the story it didn't become the story

LOLZMAN

I think it would be a useful avenue to explore Jaune's development further on as he can't just be the big brother forever. What happens when his sisters move out? It would make sense that he would then look to have his own family. For the record, I totally ship Arslan x Jaune in this story, though, of course, later, given they are only kids (or what the hell you call Jaune) and that they likely would have a cool dynamic similar to his own parents with him being the analog for his mother and Arslan being his fathers analog.

Skinnybonz

As long as it's done slow without isolating the characters. When it's rushed to the point that the characters feel too strange or they only have interaction with each other and no friends it feels off. Before the Romance, it would be pretty cool to see his friendships with others. (It would be nice to see the friendship develop with Ren since he's pretty much the only other guy his age he interacts with)

clagann

While I agree with your take on it I can also see it taking the other route where he remains content with just his family and and friendships he might form while never giving thought to romance… juane seems to have a rather utilitarian mindset afterall

Doubledoor

It feels like a natural part of getting over the Hunter's dream tbh, a proof of his ability to think long-term as opposed to the mind numbing struggle of a Hunter's life all the while also proving that he no longer fears making (and therefore possibly losing) new connections. I honestly don't mind if the romance only happens in the epilogue of the story, but I think Beacon provides a very convenient way to establish a relationship

Melikereading

I like the addition of romance, but I’d be a bit worried if romance becomes too much of a focus for the story.

xydra22

I voted because romance should play a part in his life. I don’t expect it to show up anytime soon, but hey, he is 13 now.

Laplase

I think it would add a new layer to the overall story and future plot, to be honest.

clagann

I’m going to stay out of this vote since I don’t have strong feelings towards either option


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