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G.N. Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2023-10-04 11:57:15 +0000 UTC

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Loneshadowolf

Yahoo Fist Fight

SirTockelton

Great job with the fights. I knew this was gonna be a slaughter, but fuck I forgot he has to make his PARENTS use aura to keep up during training. You just had the man do the equivalent of a high school football player start punting preschoolers.

SkeletalPheonix Games

I got sent to the moon with this chapter, oh the dismantaling of those students on top of the final realisation the he did no infact lie about not having aura. *chef's kiss* a fine meal this chapter was, but now that he has infact shown what he can do so begins the spiral that will be people trying to recruit him and others begining to fear him as those of yharnam did there own hunters. Salem is f*****, for all she is will be another nightmare to slay. once again thanks for the chapter and may you find your worth in the waking world.

Ben H.

I suspect the smell of salt would likely remain as it is, locked to some degree over his level of exertion and mood in equal measure, but would perhaps be more noticeable or the smell of blood come out more often when said smell is active. That said, I am incredibly eager to see what his semblance might be if he does get one, but I wouldn't be surprised either if it doesn't come about due to other Bloodborne things already being present such as the Blacksky Eye(?) shown during the Spriggan fight.

Chalino

Holy fucking shit. This had me at the edge of my seat

Ace

Nope thanks for pointing that out, that was supposed to be Ars;an's master as I like to reinforce the importance in Shrine Academy attributes to personal students and their teachers.

PoisonPen37

Agreed. That was a very well-written fight scene.

xydra22

10/10, did enjoy.

Matthew Hennes

Pocket Sand!!!!! XD

Dustin Dubbo

Jaune got hit with the magical equivalent of pocket sand and didn’t like that disrespect lol

Xi

Excellent fight scenes!

Ben H.

Absolutely amazing, my only regret is that I read it so quickly so now I have to wait another week. Also, ““Yes, mother,” Arslan bowed.” Was that intentional?

clagann

Best chapter yet

A Bad Rose

FUCKIN CHILLS, BRO. “What Aura?” Send me over the moon this instant! If anything, I’m certain Himiko won’t stop here. She’s *seen* what Jaune is capable of, and to know that all of it is without a single point of Aura has got to be more than mind blowing. She could be the mentor to the next greatest Kutsuki! The man who would lift their family into legendary status amongst all of Remnant! I don’t imagine she’ll just let go of that. As for Jaune? That whole salt thing you’ve started teasing is really shooting me through the roof, and it’s really making me wonder what ending you’re having as canon for this story. Is Jaune the squiggly boi in human form? Is his connection to Yharnam and all its horrors just so strong that their mere essence can bleed into Remnant through his will? I also had an epiphany. Is Jaune ever going to get his Aura? I assume so, but now honestly thinking, that would be *really* dangerous for Remnant, wouldn’t it? If Aura is the embodiment of the soul, and Jaune is already emanating the essence of Yharnam, (through unknown means, mind you), I’m not sure it would be wise to have that essence just on full display at all times. I don’t know if I’m mixing up canon or fanon, but isn’t Aura passively active once unlocked? Everybody’s going to be smelling the ocean 24/7 regardless of Jaune’s mood at that point, no? Heavens forbid that boy gets a Semblance, by the way. I mean, please give him one for the love of all things unholy, but if he does, irregardless of what it is and on top of his Aura, I’m not even sure he could stopped by Salem if she exists in this plot. I mean, he’s killed literal *Gods* already.

Mr.Mystery101

I have one complaint, and that’s it was over to quick. You did an amazing job and I didn’t even realize it the chapter was over. I just can wait to see what’s next.

Laplase

This was a Great fight scene and I can't wait for either the continuation or aftermath!

Doubledoor

damn, that was a good fight scene. It's been a while since I got this pumped from a fight and this wasn't even a particularly important one! Great job!


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