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G.N. Chapter 33

🕑 Added 2023-10-29 13:40:20 +0000 UTC

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MalachiaDemon

Understandable. Soul eater was the first anime I've ever watched and was my second guess. I also understand that the manga is quite different from the anime.

Ace

Ah no I am unfamiliar with that particular series, Franky's name was inspired by Professor Stein from Soul Eater which I will not elaborate on further due to the fact that I have bittersweet feelings about Soul Eater.

MalachiaDemon

Hey quick question; Did you ever read those Franny K. Stein books? Cause the name of the Guild Master's name reminded me of the old book series.

Ace

Hey guys, I want to state in no uncertain terms that the Omake is non-canon. Orr did not send Jaune nudes, and though her relationship with Jaune is one of closeness, a lot of her behaviour is done explicitly with the express purpose of messing with Hellebore.

Ace

I mentioned him earlier as well but since we dont know a lot about the great war other than that it started as a land dispute (Mainly) I am gonna spice it up how ever I please.

Skrubstar

Ah gotcha! Caught the Ryoma reference, but absolutely missed Icarly having not seen the show lol

Spyglass

I WAS RIGHT!

Ace

YOU BET YOUR ASS IT WAS!

Ace

The second reference the omake being inspired from a funny scene from Icarly, i figured since it was non canon no one would mind.

Ace

Her first Husbands name is in reference to Sakamoto Ryoma who was a low ranking Samurai in real life who was an advocate for democracy.

Spyglass

Was that a Commissar Yarrick reference?

A Bad Rose

Though true, I’ll give Orr the benefit of the doubt that she understands her boundaries. Jaune is a grown man in a child’s body. I imagine she enjoys teasing at that fact more so than any actual attraction. If there is any actual attraction, I think she’d understand the moral implications and at least wait until he’s of age. As of right now, though? She’s pretty much just an older college sister; wild and free-spirited, but caring in her own way. And what older sister doesn’t have a few embarrassing moments of her siblings?

Ben H.

Jokes aside, there is a concern to be had I think that this is a 20-30 year old woman and a 13-14 year old “kid” interacting like this, no? I hate to be a wet blanket or the like, but it is something that’s been on my mind with all this

Skrubstar

Himiko’s story was beautifully told, well done. Out of curiosity, what was the reference? I seemed to have missed it.

clagann

Whatcha got there? A smoothie….

Setsura Yuki

With Ace's permission, I might be able to recreate those photos 👀

A Bad Rose

I’ve always appreciated when stories expand upon in-world history. I liked the Arc tribe history, but having the Faunus Rights Revolt being expounded upon was not something I was expecting, and this is a welcome surprise to be sure. And how beautifully it ties into the Kutsuki history! Ryōma’s story was a good way to repair some of the awkwardness between the family and the implications… that is a deep knife into the heart, man. Well done! Still curious about this “Jason” person, but I imagine that, given the way Mei was speaking about it, and the “implications,” that’s probably in the near future, so I’m looking forward to it! Also, sassy little Joon is a treat. Big protecc energy right there. Needless to say, you’ve got me curious about her story too, lol. The omake was just the cherry on top, honestly. You gotta love, Orr. And Ramus, too, of course. Still, gotta wonder just how incriminating those photos were… Awesome work! Can’t wait for the next one.

MalachiaDemon

This was one hell of a chapter. I'm really enjoying learning more about Jaunes family and having him interact with more people outside of his immediate family

Ace

nope that is me being a dumbass thank you for spotting it will fix

Setsura Yuki

Also is Saki a fictional drink or did you misspell Sake? Or was that on purpose?

Setsura Yuki

Thank you for the chapter. You cracked my heart open, scrambled it, then served it to me bloody and warm. Yet I can't hate you for it. Hell, the omake was a sweet drink in just the right temperature to soothe the wound. Also the potential of seeing Jaune in kimono in near future. I sure wonder how a croc faunus would look like. Oh I really need to get back to drawing soon

Doot

Next chapter, breaking Orr out of federal prison

Ace

Thank you! and lets be honest at this point he has a few powers that aren't Semblances.

Ace

She was left without adequate supervision.

Doot

ORR NO

SirTockelton

Great chapter and good job showing us who Himiko actually is. Of course jaune is using his 'not a semblance' dream powers to snoop.


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