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G.N. Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2023-11-06 06:49:14 +0000 UTC

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Andre

Ahh - Your really good at storytelling and I love all the scenes that mention the Doll, every time Jaune thinks back to her it makes me feel emotional. Even after all this time not seeing her, the Doll that helped him so much, he still feels her impact, getting emotional and things like that, you can see he still feels the loss of her company.

Ace

Dammit Benjamin! I reread these chapters like three times and you still catch things I miss! Give me your eyes damn you! I need that INSIGHT!

Ben H.

It was discussed around when he was about to go on the “First Quest” but the logic is that, statistically speaking, aura users attract a disproportionate amount of attention when compared to non-aura users. Jaune decided the risk wasn’t worth the benefit, and I suppose since then he hasn’t changed his mind nor has he seen the need to unlock it, given currently his skills are more than adequate for what he’s dealing with on a regular basis. I imagine it’s also something that Ace would enjoy keeping up his sleeve. It helps elevate scenes and dialogue if he can be this terrifying without an Aura, especially because at this point, Aura users are essentially, by most of the bystanders at least, expected to be able to achieve feats such as his, therefore it would rob it of some of its meaning if he has that advantage, raising the expectations and therefore making him surpass them by a slimmer margin.

Ben H.

Incidentally, while I think we can all agree Rammus is a dear, I think in this case you meant that he was a deer.

clagann

The amount of feelings in this chapter, especially at the grave part, almost brought a tear to my eye Unfortunately it’s very dry in my room so nothing happened Either way great chapter can’t wait to see those slayer marks

Ben H.

I loved the chapter, hate how I have to wait another week for the next, but loved the chapter. I thought the grave section was especially beautiful and the slayer marks are something I’m looking forward to seeing the impact of. I do wonder if there’s a plan to deviate from canon once that time comes, and if not, what the impact there will be, but make no mistake, I’m loving this regardless of the trajectory, and the pacing is amazing (it’s the waiting for the next release I’m not as fond of).

Dustin Dubbo

I am kinda curious as to why Jaune hasn’t gotten his Aura unlocked already anyway; like he is 13 which is right around when most people start combat school. I mean if Aura is like a muscle it would be better to get started early with it right?

SirTockelton

Top stuff as always. I like this snippet storytelling approach to the vacation because when I remember my previous vacations, it's in these bits and pieces. The last two loves Juane thinks about, I wonder in what context he's taking it. For Agape, does he think of the love the doll has, Djura for the beasts in old yharnman, or the great ones for their creations? And for Mania, is it Gerhmann's love for maria? The nuns love for the good hunter? The church, choir, menis, and/or burgenwurths' love for insight and knowledge? The great ones? The executioners love of vileblood slaughter? Would love to see how those 'loves' color his future prospects seeing how he condemned Orr's ship to port. Finally, cannot understate enough how well you've done on actually humanizing Himiko. Her in these past two chapters have been *chefs kiss*. Can't wait to see how/if the slayer marks affect his not-a-semblance-but-most-certainly-not-a-cuttlefish-powers

Laplase

I'm excited for next chapter and this one was kind of deep in a good way.

Doot

Lovely chapter, I can’t wait to see what runes Jaune gets put on him!

Doubledoor

Lots of feels in this chapter, the section about the doll reminded me of the firekeeper's last words in DS3. "Ashen one, hearest thou my voice, still?"

Setsura Yuki

Thank you for the chapter!! This left me with a lot of mixed feelings. Some sweet but also painful. I was kinda hoping for a kimono showing off session but mmm, the impromptu story session is good too. Man I am so curious about Jaune's love live in yharnam!

A Bad Rose

An awesome chapter, and I love the layout of this one. I think it works so well because of the arc we’re in. Were this a more serious section, I don’t imagine it’d translate as well. That training section was a nice touch, and a lovely way to get Atalanta in on family bonding time as well. Hinata is a sly fox, isn’t she? Loving her so much! Big big one for me is Jaune’s story. Yes! More Yharnam! The sisters are dying to know more, and so am I! Real talk, it was nice to see the sister’s reactions to Jaune being open for once, and what better place for it than story time! One story I’ve been curious about is the one where there’s no difference between the Hunter, the Monster, and the Moon. Is it a reference to the Beast Scourge? And finally, the end. I don’t imagine the runes can be kept secret any longer. At some point or another, someone’s gonna ask about ‘em, (my first guess is Cloud), and I wonder how he’s going to spin them. Sure, he could tell them they have stories, but that doesn’t solve the root of the problem in that, where did these stories even originate? We obviously know, but like hell Jaune is ever going to tell them anything about Yharnam that he doesn’t have to. Fantastic work, and thank you for this treat!


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