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G.N. Chapter 43

🕑 Added 2024-03-10 17:35:31 +0000 UTC

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clagann

I think so far having the other POVs adds the atmosphere of danger during the breach. If it was entirely from jaunes POV it would honestly end comparatively anticlimaticly. Having the other POVs panicking allows the following jaune POV to contrast as he kicks butt like it’s just another Tuesday.

Alex

LETS GOOOOOOOOOO good job my guy

uo b

I'm loving the tense it make with him focusing on other pov personly.

uo b

Thx loved the chapter

clagann

Not yet no he’s just freakishly strong

clagann

The lord blesses us this day with another chapter

Melikereading

Hey there! Thanks for the chapter! I agree with Laplase though. It’s wonderful for world building but it seems to me, as a reader, Jaune’s in the back seat of the story now. That’s just my opinion though, your story is still awesome☺️.

LoneStar

Great stuff. While I want Jaune’s prospective, I like what you did. Using a regular civilian to help build up & establish the true terror & bloodshed the Grimm can cause for the chapters going forward. Loved it & look forward to the next chapter.

Erik Johanson

Well, this was a fun chapter indeed, I really don't regret re-subbing for a month for this. I quite like how everyone goes WTF as soon as Jaune is involved. It's very entertaining.

Jordan

Does Jaune have aura?

Laplase

Maybe try to focus on Jaune for a while instead of the surrounding Pov's until this is over and then do an interlude. Thanks for the chapter!

ASHNRider

Peak again


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