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🕑 Added 2019-03-01 06:44:11 +0000 UTC
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Twinkee

<a href="https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_046jEHIe-bMEqFEsEkp8qKVuAJBxI6P" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_046jEHIe-bMEqFEsEkp8qKVuAJBxI6P</a> I love seeing this comic progress.

TSH

I don't use it in the contexts that they use it, certainly.

Arioch

Do you not use the word "excellent"? I do. :D

Arioch

Spiral has the more extreme grammar, but I do try to make Talon's speech as distinctive as I can while still being clear and not making her sound like an idiot. It's something I should spend more effort on.

TSH

I notice both Talon and Beryl using the term "excellent", is that a particular of trade, or are the loroi suprisingly familiar with the 90s?

CJSF

Talon's grammar seems to have improved, which is fine for readability, but I miss her pseudo-eastern European accent (in my head)! Anyway, glad to see this in final form on the site. Looks great as usual. Great job, Arioch.

Arioch

Yeah. Thanks.

Sunphoenix72

Hey wait in cell 3 isn't Tallon missing her right cheek tattoo for her Direnal{sp}?

Sunphoenix72

Alex may be generating the most 'heat' of any of them...lol.. the idea they might all end up cuddling closer to him for HIS body heat is amusing!~ :)

TSH

Wait, can the suit regulate human temperatures?


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