Outsider page 130
🕑 Added 2018-05-01 06:33:01 +0000 UTC Still needs some cleanup, obviously, particularly in the diagrams. I will attend to it shortly.Can't believe it's May already.
[edit 5/2/18]: Cleanup has been done.
Comments
Arioch
Clearbrook is the frigate that the shuttle is heading towards rendezvous with.
Michael Pettersson
Considering the communikation lag of lightspeed transmissions Clearbrook obviusly started to run för it at the first sign of trouble, when the first enemy ship's begun to enter the system, it is not a reaction to the deep jumping ships, unless the Highlander are very close to Clearbrook by now. In any case, do not interrupt your enemy when he make mistakes. If the second force really lost "half their ships", it's a plus but the survivors do get a good tactical position.
I feel a bit confused. Who is clearbrook? The last few panels I wasn't sure who is talking to whom...
Michael
Many thanks, love the updats
Robin
The diagrams make perfect sense if you read this: <a href="http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/forum_ftl_tech.html" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://well-of-souls.com/outsider/forum_ftl_tech.html</a>
Robin
loving all the new Pages, Thanks Arioch! Indeed you're on a roll! And upping my pledge! (though I might lower it again after a couple months of no pages)
Sunphoenix72
What are WE doing...?!? Running the hell away...what's it look like !!! :)
Joshua Samuel Lapple
I swear you are on a roll man. Keep it up.
Anthony Docimo
(the diagrams don't look like they need work, particularly the ones explaining jumps and space travel...those are well-timed asides for the reader, right? or quickly-jotted-down explanations for the human? either way works)
Anthony Docimo
excellent inkwork and conversings.
Anthony Docimo
"what're we doing? running towards! why, whats it look like?" :)