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Draikhyan
A bulkhead is the condition a crewmember suffers from when he/she forgets to lower his/her head when passing from one compartment to another on board of a ship. Symptoms are: lumps, bruises, cuts and a lot of swearing.
Alfred Broda
Can't wait to see this page finished - I love the design of the hardtroops!
Canopus
Don't ships have "bulkheads", rather than "walls"? But what do I know; my Dad was in the air force.
Arioch
Thanks for the feedback.
S. Fish
Bit of a pronoun reference in that first line -- "splattered against it;" what does 'it' refer to? the wall or the hardtroop? Obviously it becomes clear after a second read, but it might be worth rewording the passage to make it a little more clear.
Kclcmdr Kai
Fireblade has lots of anger issues... especially with the Bugs that undoubtedly lay waste to her home planet & her family....
Michael Pettersson
After been tied down with this obnoxious human for so long Fireblade really knows how take out her frustration on the umiak crew... π
Classical Salamander
"Fireblade" ...'nuff said!
JasonAW3
Alex, a word of advice? When you're finally married to Fireblade, don't tick her off...
GhostlyYorick
Yeah, well compared to say psychokinetically moving a brain around in a skull, which might have been the method of killing these bugs...
Shane Wegner
So in retrospect, that time she pushed Jardin out of the way in the elevator she was actually being relatively gentle with him.
Shane Wegner
Itβs a feature.
ESP
Black, per the previous page
Anthony Docimo
what gives you that impression? :D
Anthony Docimo
superb work on dialogue and art.
Anthony Docimo
WOW! Now imagine, Alex, if Fireblade had feelings for you - she wouldn't let any bug anywh....oh my. :)
Snoofman
What a buggy, bloodbath! Yes Fireblade! Rain down psychokinetic destruction on thy enemies!
THE_R3X
What colour is their blood?
Dragoongfa
Someone is obviously letting out some steam.
