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Herald of the Stars: Chapter Three Hundred and Twenty-Nine

🕑 Added 2025-11-14 16:00:19 +0000 UTC

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Edmund Latham

Thank you! I was trying to make them sound sinister. I am pleased that it worked.

STORRM

very smooth! love the "The mines slip inside thrusters, sneak into hangars, and glide through holes ripped into hulls" makes the mines seem way way more ominous, more like sharks in the night then sea urchins.

abowden

It's nice to see them whoop those run down traitors like they really, logically should with their uncompromised DAoT gear.

Andrew Pribble

Thanks for the chapter! I love to see the when the Fleet’s advantages in tech really shine. I think it helps to compare with an average fleet from time to time, and see how ridiculous things become. Love to see the fleet get a win, often times they deal in half- or hard-won victories. Love to see them straight up whoop some ass. Hopefully they are appropriately acknowledged for it. Speaking of advantages, they are so much better than the ‘setting’ so to speak, that surely there is no risk of the ‘fake station’ ruse being seen through? If only because for the average people of 40K, the level of manufacturing capability to just simply build a station for a ruse is so implausible as to be dismissed entirely. It wouldnt even occur to them that the station could be ‘fake’. It would be outside of context. It would be like someone built a house then trashed it for a practical joke in our life, just not really a consideration.


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