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First Draft of I Don't Know the Title Commentary

🕑 Added 2021-11-13 01:37:31 +0000 UTC

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happy to see real reflection and insight back in sneako videos

Sabih Mahmood

Your point is valid but the way you put it forward needs some work. The point about music concerts is valid, but how does this relate to the history of europe and paris? And how does escaping reality link to french millionaires? It feels like you're telling 2 stories instead of just one. Try making a video just on the whole music idea. Editing is very harsh and since your points don't flow as well as they usually do, the video feels disjointed. B Roll is very good Good concept, mid execution.

yo why u keep saying parallelogram lmao wdym by that

Agreed

For SNEAKO fans it’s good, maybe more B-Roll. If you’re trying to reach mainstream audiences though I think they might find the nuanced blend between your sarcasm and real commentary a bit too indistinct.

Or maybe that’s just me needing a title for reference tbh

Still entertaining though

Feel like the video is somewhat disconnected, with a lot of the things you mention not being linked back to any main idea, not necessarily a problem, just makes the video feel more like a recap of your recent events rather than one with a particular purpose/message

Ur fun ain’t fun

Title idea : Fun is fucked

Guitaro 5000

Or "Are you really having fun?"

Guitaro 5000

Your B roll is absolutely beautiful. I honestly want to see more. Even though you're endlessly handsome, I could take way more of the scenery over the car shots in the beginning. Ideas for a title "When fun is fake."

; the world is too paranoid and attention seeking

Damn you know Malik Dupri ?