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Comic update! (W.I.P. pages)
🕑 Added 2017-08-05 22:19:17 +0000 UTC You can check the progress on the comic as it is right now, some part of the script needs a revision to better fit the tone of the character's personalities, some pages have finished lineart while others are finished sketches, As of now, 11 pages are in the works, while im setting a goal of finishing at least 6 to compensate for the other 4 pages that had to be rewritten to better fit the story.im thinking on making around 30-40 pages for the main chapters, while stories that dont focus on the main plot will be shorter , around 10-20, depending on whats being told, all of them will be in the same universe, some stories might explore other characters, concepts or stories that go alongside the main storyline.
Please let me know your thoughts on this, feedback is the most important thing for me!
Again , thanks for supporting me during this journey!
Comments
Trias
I like the general thought on that. It's a very expanded concept. For the WIPs as they are now, I like the early introduction of a villain character, I wonder how that will turn out later on in the story! The indicated side-plot of Parfait having a love-realtionship in secret adds also a nice spicey touch. But I recommend to focus on the main plot first and not opening too many chapters early on, so we can get invlolved first before spreading out :) Now I don't know how evaluate your script is, I for example didn't use one at all till now, yet I think it would be good to let us know more about the villain character, like "why piece all of a sudden?" and "what actually happened that they were enemies in the first place?" Hope that's useful ^^
RegularJard
You had me at "right between your massive tits" :D Looking good so far, comic with animated panels? You're too good to us Plaga
Nopast
It's cute seeing Parfait having feelings for someone aside from the girls~
