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The Monster in the Manor: Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2025-09-06 15:00:14 +0000 UTC

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MissMX3

Good questions! I was wondering about the car too. Love the moat idea! 😂

C. A. Renee

Just leave them alone, crazy people. They deserve peace and quiet. I will go to bat for these two

RUTH FEIERTAG

Hmmm: a bite that heals quickly? That’s kind of vampiric. Is Rupert a mixed-race monster? I am looking forward to Aunt Stella. She sounds like a version of Lady Catherine deBurgh. You know I love the way you bring characters to life. Query: Rupert and Peony talk just before she goes to the store. Rupert tells us that “ The one concession I made was that we’d get her a different vehicle.” But then we’re told “Peony’s agreement to my terms was begrudging, and I know she resents that I went out and purchased her a gently used Toyota.” If Rupert is the one who acceded to the idea of a different car, why is Peony grudging that he got her what she wanted? And if they decided she should have the car just before she leaves for the store, how did he already have the Toyota? Was she driving the Toyota when the reporters saw her? Did they follow her from the store or did they show up at Rupert’s house while Peony was at the store? Will Rupert have to buy a whole bunch of cars so Peony can drive a new car every time she goes out? I think Rupert should add a moat, drawbridge, and portcullis to the entrance. The moat should have a kraken which will pull reporters down into the depths, never to be seen again.


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