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Blood from Stone, Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2021-11-02 16:55:54 +0000 UTC

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So I am finally getting around to actually reading your work... I know you have probably edited this already by now but in case you missed it. Paragraph 6 "... not a single bastard one of them...." It reads kind of weird. Maybe "... not one single bastard of them...." or "... not a single bastard of them..." Paragraph 7: Not sure if you meant home or hone. But dang I'm already hooked.


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