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Chapter 106 - Hidden Trainer Found!

🕑 Added 2022-06-11 04:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Jason Me

i'm only reading this now but do agree with the above points, i'm really hoping the relationship ends or at least the author keeps the points to a minimum, a whole book pretty much without any kind of romance with the MC and now its full bore - i'm coming across too many stories doing the same thing and I find it ruins a good story with unnecessary romance etc. but that's just my opinion

And you said he doesn't blab... With a straight face even. LOL

Knows girl for 3 days. Immediately tells her all his deepest darkest secrets, even after she has made it clear to him that her daughter is more important than he is, and she would do anything for the child. Including betray him for an almost incalculable amount of money to take care of said daughter.

V B

Like I said before: blabermouth. The isuue is the story is very interesting, but the character is behaving like a bipolar moron. There was no reason to tell her that he has all the gold. She asumed he stolen a couole of ingots, as much as he could cary. The mister "bipolar no secret" blabbers about having it all.

lenkite

"Her eyes widened. “No. Fucking. Way."" He IS. A. FUCKING. IDIOT. He said he would NEVER TELL ANOTHER SOUL. Yet he immediately does so a few days later. There are some things you should take to the grave - this is one of them. At-least please don't make Eric make SOLEMN VOWS - and then IMMEDIATELY BREAK THEM. What happens if he breaks his relationship with her ? More..What if her child is threatened ? She would give up the details of his heist immediately in the latter. No..No..No.. I really hate the MC. I thought, just for once, the author would make him keep a secret that he solemly said he would take to the grave. And he immediately breaks it. Can't he keep his mouth shut and not reveal stuff JUST FOR ONCE ?

Grant lee merrifield

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