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Chapter 107 - Love, Intrigue, and Recruitment

🕑 Added 2022-06-13 04:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Right, but he used 2 chapters to get there. Seems a bit unnecessary.

Silver Beard

He needs to shore up that trash cultivation technique before he completes his core compression; but I don't see him getting anything from a 'reputable' source like the Blue Faction.

Iain Grubb

Id guess an Inn or arpartment building in the Blue Quarter before they join a guild and form a party. Sounds like he knows some reliable people to run it.

Iain Grubb

If the Goblins are known to be ruthless but at least trustworthy in terms of Banking should be ok to bank, although it may be worth spreading it out across several (100) branches.

Iain Grubb

They have been in town one night, and are now up for an early morning walk, I'd say they will get to the Blue Quarter and the bank at some point today

Iain Grubb

Thanks for the chapter :) Posible Edit: She looped her arm about his waist as they continued to walk, leaning her head against her*(his) shoulder. “Being together… and being happy.”

Fortunis

I'm figuring one of 2 things will happen, either he starts a guild, or he buys a mobile base of some kind. Maybe both. Thats just speculation though.

Fortunis

Gotta say i agree with the other two comments. Rica is great and all, but the dude is carrying around literally tons of gold and he could literally explode if he doesn't unload it and turn it in to credits. And for some reason he's fucking around day shopping and sucking face while eatining cinnamon rolls. The last 2 chapters seem like word padding cause other than a couple exposition points (like the necromancer thing) if they vanished from the story you wouldn't miss anything. Weren't his goals to get the gold deposited in to a bank for credits and finding class and skill information? What happened to that drive? And he's still got 10% of his core to complete as well. Instead he's dicking around with inconsequential stuff. And yah, I get he wants to blow off steam and explore his new relationship. That's all fine, but that shouldn't distract from the important stuff. Just my 2 cents.

Silver Beard

He can set her and the kid up in a penthouse in the Blue Quarter and still go do his own thing. Having a 'home base' isn't a bad idea really but story wise- he's still close to Gilton- he might be rufusing to talk to his Family, but they will surely be watching for him or anyone close to him. (Still think the Goblins is the way to go... they'd sell him anything if he has the cash and he does.)

Silver Beard

Needs to unload the gold; seems obvious he can't start adventuring/growing until that's done. So quit dragging it out please! The slice of life is OK if progression returns. Set the stage with the Blue Quarter already... the problem is whomever he entrusts his gold too is going to turn into a Major player... will it be him or a faction?

Nimps

Sorry bud, but you have just completely changed the whole tune of your story since rica came along. This entire chapter was fluff with lovey dovey slice of life meh. You started off with an MC that fought and improved pretty much every chapter and now we are lucky to see any of that. I swear 75% of the stuff you write is slice of life now. Normally I wouldn't have an issue with that if the book was supposed to be like that. But it clashes hard with this idea that there is currently a race to the top and anyone not sprinting is going to fall behind.


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