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Chapter 115 - Ambush

🕑 Added 2022-06-27 04:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Phil Haddock

"curdling" s/b 'curling', "it’s sheath" s/b 'its sheath', "bonified" s/b 'bona fide',

Iain Grubb

Taking a broom to Goblin Town may be on the cards soon ^ ^

M.H. Johnson

Great questions! There will be a follow up low key chapter after this, but then the intensity will be picking up once more! We're talking some hardcore high-stakes negotiation, doing his utmost to lock in an absolute FORTUNE with his new best friends :) and an opportunity to sit in a conference where all his enemies get to tell multiple high level adventurers why they should all work for them. Then the pace will REALLY pick up from there! - Expect plenty of complications for our hero in the chapters ahead. Next month will pretty much be nonstop adventure :)

Milton Skipper

To the author. A couple of quick questions: When will the MC find a bank to unload his wealth? Blue corp is supposed to be the home of the elite best of the best. A smash and grab group just does not make sense, even if he's party is flashing wealth they are in an area such things should be a common event. Perhaps next chapter will answer some questions, maybe an author post just to explain some of your ideas.

Milton Skipper

This chapter will hopefully be the prelude to the return of the MC from before. I'm staying positive cause even if the actions were moronic. My thought process goes like this.... MC finally reaches a safe place, has money, and just goes crazy in being safe. Now, he has been harshly reminded even in a safe zone without power people will stomp on him and his folks.

Fortunis

Interesting point of view considering I paid to be here. Also considering if I DON'T point this shit out the author won't have any idea he needs to either fix things or expect terrible reviews when he decides to publish it. Because most of the rest of you are just " mmhmm great story bro, need moar!" 👍 see, you say you agree with most of my comments now, but I haven't seen you post anything remotely critical or constructive to give the dude writing the story a clue on what's good for mass market and what's not. Me? I like critiquing stories because it helps authors i likeke to read, fix what I think doesn't work. I do it on RR too. I've read both this authors other series, so its not like I showed up to pan his storyline cause I'm an asshole either. The first book was great. The mc had reasonably good character growth and class growth. He went from a naive kid to a battle hardened badass in a few months. Especially with a crew of hardened criminals as mentors. Then this gets dropped on us? I don't understand it. So one of 2 things happened. Either the character had some mental shenanigans happen to him he hasn't figured out yet, or the author decided to go in a weird direction and drop his MC back to a naive idiot. Guess we'll see which it is down the road.

Winston Smith

You sure complain a lot. Look I agree with most of your comments and would like to see the MC go back to being smart and start moving the story along. That said, the author can do what they want, and you throwing a temper tantrum in the comments of every single chapter isn't going to change anything. Chill out and wait two weeks. Then read all the chapters at once and hopefully things will be back on track. Nobody is forcing you to follow this story either.

Honestly, if the author just apologized and said that he was going to delete the entire second book and start over in order to write something good, I would be incredibly OK with that.

Kemizle

This arc feels artificial

Fortunis

I think the thing that pisses me off most about these latest chapters, is that the author makes it clear Eric is a moron. He even makes sure the MC is AWARE he's a moron. But he does nothing to fix it. For fuck sake, last book Eric had all kinds of plans to keep his wealth hidden. The he gets to rich people town and all that shit goes right out the window. Common sense just up and takes a vacation.


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