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Chapter 116 & 117 - Let's Make A Deal!

🕑 Added 2022-06-28 04:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Phil Haddock

"the chose" s/b 'they chose', "free reign" s/b 'free rein', "thrice over once more" doesn't make sense, should just be 'thrice over', "protoge’s" s/b 'protege's ',

Fortunis

Eric shrugged. “But yeah, between decent stats and, let’s just say, a few perks, and we’ll call my background a perk all it’s own, I'm able to spot scumbags like the goblins.” that's a lie. If it were true he never would have go e to the goblin bank in the first place since, again, every single person he talked to about them told him out right they were slaving thieving assholes. I do like what you seem to be doing with his money though. Setting it up to grow his fortune enormously is smart.

Alex

Ahhhhhhh!!!!! I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Also I really enjoyed how you wrote out the negotiation, such tension, such byplay, so well written!

Jon Lomax

tftc, looking forward the guild meeting arc

Iain Grubb

Noice, money nearly sorted and may be about to get some guild action. Or run into some old blood buddies.

Winston Smith

Always down for a buffet. :)

A B

tyfc!


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