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Chapter 240 - A Desperate Gamble

🕑 Added 2023-01-11 04:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Kitty

Wasn't the fast draw skill check called something else before?

50 score = 1000 and I don't think you mean that here

Rhexas

Agree wholeheartedly on the editting front. With the right editor, this would be absolute fire. The mystic realm sequence went on way too long. And the bowing and scraping b/t Eric and Samuel was just awkward. It really wasn't believable. And then, once more, there's the constant head nodding. Maybe that's just my own pet peeve.

Terri Harris

You need a good editor. So much repetition so many monologues. Maybe book 2 and 3, can just be book 2, after cutting out the, rrrrr seriously? I feel like a beta reader who isnt getting paid enough.

Goldfish2

I remember the author saying it looked like a cross between two swords so that’s why I’m not thinking he mixed up the words or shorten it otherwise wouldn’t the author call it as it is?

Eltirno

An odachi is a two-handed weapon with a very long blade, so from context, can't be it - too long to draw from a worn scabbard. More likely, "dachi" is an alternative spelling of "tachi."

Goldfish2

Awesome. Also I tried searching up a dachi but I only get the odachi. However I believe you would call it an odachi if that was what your referring to but since you referred the weapon as a cross between two types of swords…can you give me a link to a dachi pick…or do you mean odachi?


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