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Chapter 248 - Preparing for the Final Offensive.

🕑 Added 2023-01-30 04:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Kitty

Yeah, and he was only out like half an hour... Why didn't Sis complete her ritual??

Rhexas

So this established a timeframe now, which kind of leads to all sorts of questions as Drevyn said he claimed these territories in less than 2.5 hours. So... 1) Wasn't Elonia's ritual to break the inventory lock just going to take an hour? 2) What has the main enemy force been doing all this time? It seemed like they were very, very close. I'd have thought they could have just waltz'd into the keep by now. An okay chapter, but not much happened other than a conversation. Hoping for some real action next chapter. :)

Joe

Ironic how Eric critics tropes

Antony Haynes

Eric decided, unconsciously and by circumstance, to forget about Rica/Ria/Caliban because his sister is the only person he loves unconditionally and he won't attempt to rescue anyone else unless he's completely saved his sister.

justin

I do feel like the shiny city was a bit under welming and what happened to the books. Did he really learn anything from month long trip to death?

Goldfish2

XD

justin

Last born son, as in the winter queen has had other sons. The girl is the last born since she was born after him.

Anonymous

I am giving up this story. I feel like it went off the rails back with Death in the library. Those two chapters were just too “woo-woo” for me. He is a necromancer, he would not have thought of that place as a library rather than a place of Death. Then he returns to Earth to just go through more of the same shit, rather than going to Freetown to rescue Rica, Ria, and Caliban. I just do not buy it, the character you portrayed for so many chapters would not just let a 2 year old child suffer. Really a shame, this could have been a great story.

Tabais

As much as I enjoy the authors work he does often give us filler chapters that just repeat the same information over and over. Did this chapter actually do anything at all to progress the story or was it just the author patting his MC on the back about his stats?

Goldfish2

Warrr!!! Also isn’t it known fact he is the firstborn or did the mom silence and even kill anyone who says otherwise even though she acknowledges him as firstborn? XD is it a hierarchy thing in elf terms? Are they mainly matriarchy?


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