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Chapter 282 - A Desperate Gambit

🕑 Added 2023-04-19 15:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Goldfish2

Hm. That dragon horde worth of treasure will probably do good in helping the cost.

I disagree with your assessment of Eric. While yes he did have a silver spoon type upbringing it was also accompanied by insanely tough expectations and lack of a supportive happy environment to grow up in. He also was literally burned alive while watching his own twin get tossed into said hell before his very eyes (not to mention the guilt from her watching his back getting her caught). All of these things including many more cause a ton of trauma that's not easy to recover from. So while you write off his struggles and damaged behavior as lacking redeeming qualities the reality is when people go to war (as Eric clearly has) and survive it the healing of the wounds gained in said war aren't often pretty. Being a combat vet myself I've gone through my own not pretty recovery and I personally identify with Eric quite a bit and his struggles to deal with a world where it's to easy to reach for a violent solution after living through situations where the violent solution is the only one that gets you and your friends home safely. It is also completely natural for his trauma to have his priorities and decision making to be out of whack as he focuses on surviving another day or getting strong enough to eventually seek out his family which before doing so would have been next to suicide as well as being a dead weight to his family after so many months trapped in the pod. Just my 2 cents though as we are all allowed to have different opinions. Still to say Eric has no real redeeming qualities is a bit rough on the character as if anything I feel like he's more like a normal person with most people being a mix of good and bad aspects personality wise.

Antony Haynes

The natural story arc after rescuing the sister was to rescue the girlfriend, but MHJ created an artificial obstacle to prevent this (that if Eric rescued the girlfriend he'd end up going to war with Blue Faction)--so the real issue is that MHJ grew tired of the girlfriend arc. In a sense it's poor planning of the story narrative, because as justin pointed out, some type of internal monologue might have helped the reader accept (or at least understand) Eric's decision to abandon the girlfriend (who he kept calling the love of his life). In most stories, the hero will move heaven and earth to save the primary love interest, which the girlfriend was at one point shaping up to be (but I think MHJ changed her mind). Given that Eric has repeatedly harmed himself in an effort to save strangers, it does seem odd that he can't be bothered to lift a finger to rescue a girl whom he at one point saw himself settling down with--especially given that he knew she was imprisoned, tortured, likely raped repeatedly, and then sold into slavery. Given the strong feelings Eric has for his twin sister, it's almost as if the sister is the love of his life, since MHJ repeatedly writes that Eric sees his sister as the women he most loves in the world and the women he would move heaven and earth to save. One interpretation would be that the Eric and his sister are two parts of the same being and thus he is really saving himself when he saves her; the other interpretation is that he has some type of subconscious, incestuous, sexual desire for his sister. Also, don't forget that Eric's mother, the Winter Queen, has Silver-tier abilities in charm and it's possible that she used her charm to warp Eric's behavior to prevent him from attacking the goblins in Freetown (in order to save the girlfriend, her child, and the original bank manager) and potentially going to war with Blue Faction when they come to the goblin's defense. To me, there was something odd and inconsistent about Eric happily walking back into the heart of the Winter Queen's power when she previously tried to capture him in Freetown. One of the key drivers of narrative tension was the conflict between mother and son and the specter that Eric might have to get into a physical fight with the Winter Queen. It may be that the mother was able to use the ties of blood and motherhood to constrain Eric's behavior even though he had fled and even though he was at a distance. Thus, it's possible that pat of the erratic nature of Eric's behavior toward the girlfriend results from some type of charm or other magical influence of the mother.

justin

I agree he is impulsive and some what inconsistent. I think the story would be improved with a little dialog or internal monolog to show his feelings about these things. I choose to believe he is a young man with a shiny new toy (and skill) that distracts him and that he half understands which clouds his mind and as a completist he is completely focused on the things right in front of him. Also he may have emotionally given up on the other girl which no one liked (single mother) and he only knew for a short time

Iain Grubb

Sorry just can't help disliking Eric, he is so inconsistent. He was adamant he wouldn't cheat on his enslaved and missing girlfriend with the elf lass, then immediately beds Ingrid the first chance he gets. He jumps on a soapbox about injustice and the spoiled entitled without somehow choking on his silver spoon. All the while being so concerned about the fate of his twin.... whom he ignored for a book and a half. Really doesn't have any of the redeeming character traits in his favour compared to an Alex, Jack or even Val of the other stories despite him having a mash of all their skills. At least his rants against the system have slowed now it is apparent he only exists because his mother's family has been gaming the system for hundreds/thousands of years to pick up new worlds.

Antony Haynes

At some point, I would like to see Eric's global standing, not just in the North East United States/ North America. Even better, it would be great to see Eric fight against/ ally with the leading contenders. Also, it would be great to see the development of the Ashland territory delves and the creation of the cultivation school, now that Eric has the white-tier cultivation manual. It would be nice for Eric to have a better sense of the bigger picture and to ally with others to liberate Earth.

I just know your going to make me regret having hope.


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