Patrefans
Battleforged from patreon
Battleforged patreon

Chapter 300 - Bitter Revelations

🕑 Added 2023-06-07 03:59:01 +0000 UTC

Comments

Tony C.

Love the psychotic meltdown he's having, and it's greatly realistic.

Alix Wooten

For heavens sake discontinue overusing the word countless. Its not even being used correctly. 70,000 children (not 60,000 - the error is still not corrected) is VERY countable. Also stop overusing endless, halcyon and fecund. Find other varieties of these words and concepts. It is repetitive and shows a lack of effort.

Antony Haynes

“I gave her everything. ... And I have nothing ...!” <-- O.K. Who's fault is that? Who told you to donate all of your success to others? No one forced you? As the reader, why exactly am I supposed to have sympathy for Eric? Also, why exactly Eric so erratic in his emotional attitude toward his mother? Is her faerie power so great that merely being in her presence puts him under her mental control? Oh, and also, didn't his mother swear to remove all bindings/obligations from him in exchange for him providing her the elvish army? Or is Eric's erratic emotions the result of his mother removing her bindings from him?

Goldfish2

Ima be honest. I would like to see this potential dark route. Not for the fact of how he do it which would be interesting. But his mother reaction as he destroys all he gave to her at her betrayel. I would love to see it. Seriously he needs to do something to get back at his mom.


More Creators