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Chapter 328 - We’re a team. We take down threats together.

🕑 Added 2023-08-11 03:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Goldfish2

MOREE!!

Dave Kemp

Agree, and these guys suck. Get them on his side and bail. Team up with morlekai and such.

How many more times do we have to spend have a chapter re-reading the same conversation with this group accusing Eric and flip-flopping to loving him? And why doesn't he just throw the whole thing about him literally saving them from the corrupt faction they thought they were oh so cleverly gaming? Wtf

Archit Goel

You have really gotten repeating and boring.

Iain Grubb

The repeating theme of lack of loyalty/trust is a bit grating especially after swearing their eternal gratitude a few chapters back...

M Schweibold

Overall, I love this story. I love the author’s writing style. However, I don’t understand this story arc with this new group and the constant rehashing how Ron wants to dump Eric plus everyone else occasionally backsliding on their owing Eric their lives and the story progressing at a snails pace with a chapter beginning/leaping to a new scene in a jerky fashion. This whole sequence with the new group has been a very obtuse output from this normally exceptional author.


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