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Chapter 330 - A Desperate Rescue

🕑 Added 2023-08-16 03:59:00 +0000 UTC

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M J

Good Lord why could’t they have killed Princess whiny pants Emily??

TechMagic

And I’m serious about being a fan of the book, otherwise, I would not be here, and I hate that my first comment is a complaint because I have a lot of positive things to say about the story

TechMagic

Big fan of the story, but boy are the extremely obvious mistakes getting a bit irritating. Jack should be Eric. Morlekai should be Caliban. And steel should be steal (not in this chapter, just everywhere in this book)

Kitty

Wait... Doesn't he already have a Vendetta against ALL goblins??? I'm confused.. how does this get them around the stuff they signed in Free Town?

Roger Zorn

Blue Corp rep named Morlekai? Don't you mean Caliban?

Goldfish2

Oh wow. Just like that? Ron was taken out? Or maybe a betrayal from that faint prickling sense eric had?

Rhexas

Author once again needs to read his posts. It’s like he just does stream of consciousness and hits post. Love this. Killing Ron does seem a bit lazy. Hard to retcon a reason for that illogical hate. Unless he summoned the ambushers. Holding out hope for that.

Silver Beard

He might have saved most of them this time; but it's only temporary.... longer they stick with him more likely they'll end up dead. Posted it last chapter... nobody can really group with him... but they do they have to be able to defend themselves. I admit I hated the idea of 3 wives... but if they can make the grade... he could use the support

Silver Beard

TBH I don't see how this group was ever to further his Crimson Path or his cultivation path with Death. He was essentially tread water... going no where this is bunch in tow.


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