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Chapter 339 - Parenting isn't easy.

🕑 Added 2023-09-06 00:03:57 +0000 UTC

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M J

These last few chapters have been juddering.

Kitty

WTH just happened with that chapter... Just... What the What!!???

Aegir

I think this was a really nice way to write out the experiment that was BunBun/Lily familiar. Just have her go her own way for a bit on an adjacent planet while we return to solo Eric until Bronze where she shows back up after being tutored.

Goldfish2

Thx! But hope this isn’t an end to Lilly and Eric adventure duo!

Graceling

Author is writing Lilly in a way that will allow her to travel with him non-stop without romantic conflict of interest or some "leave them behind to make bebes" ending to their adventuring relationship. So that he can be the harem stud we all want so desperately and get rid of the annoying kids since they would never be able to keep up with him. And are annoying. I also eant to say that as angry as I am about Eric always going back to helping the elves after its clear his mother has sacrificed him multiple times you have to think. She had 16+ years that she used brainwashed him and is probably suffering Stockholm syndrome. Yes he and his sister are pawns in her game, after 16+ years of that being their entire life before they literally don't know any different. I won't say that it isn't still bullshit. I agree that I believe the author needs to let his MC get a clean fucking win instead of this constant backstabbery. But I'm not writing the story, and if I, or anyone, dislike it so much. I should stop paying and stop reading.

McCane

All other things aside, at the end I am not sure if he claimed the whole world or just the part he gave to Lilly.

zalex

on one hand, I see where the author took this. This chapter is basically a dream where Eric escaped his mother's grasp and ran away with Lilly. Then 20 or so years pass. On the other hand, I think they might have taken the concept a 'little' too far. Not with the fae nature bit but more on the 'secrecy' of the realm, it's not like the goblins are not going to notice their entire Soulforge realm disappearing or being remade. It will not take a genius to figure out exactly what happened, and further, even if they can not act on this information directly, they can sell the information to Eric's enemies. Personally, I am on the fence with this chapter, but if there is a follow-up chapter about the new realm. (I am picturing ironbone reminant/skeletons being freed/reborn in what could be described as paradise. (and maybe something from some from the 60,000 survivors)


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