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Chapter 340 - Race Against Time

🕑 Added 2023-09-08 04:03:01 +0000 UTC

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M J

Teenagers shouldn’t be having children.

Michelle Conover

"sudden acute pang of sympathy for all the teenage moms who had chosen to sacrifice so much for the sake of their precious little ones, only to be forever judged by the smirks, stares, or subtle cold shoulders of countless others." This.

Goldfish2

Eric is a dad 🫠🫠🫠 did they inherit his stats and boons and titles or portion? Or more?

A B

Seriously, I thought it was just me wondering about that.

Chris Memmott

Love this story but I feel like we are on a roller coaster through a hallucination of bright ever shifting colours. It's hard to care about any one revelation or sharp twist, when it's over in half a chapter then the next is hitting a moment later. I echo the wish for a bit if a slow down and breathe for Mr Wonderful author. Please don't burn yourself out or lose love for the story

Dave Kemp

Why such the rush when earlier in the story they could easily just send system "emails"?

Jayden Southworth

I've binged this entire story the last few days, and while I see a lot of the complaints of the other commenters, I think they're a little bit too harsh. So I feel a bit begrudge to throw in some critiques, but a lot of the dislike with the direction isn't coming from something ethereal but something that is really changing within the story. And as this tier is "a part of the process" hopefully some actual constructive critiques will be listened to. With that said, everything is starting to feel like it is falling a little bit apart. I think the author needs to stop. Take a breather. And move the story back and to a coherent direction where he can save his sister or get revenge against his mother or the administrators or whatever. It also feels like there have been a lot of excess amount of "handicapped twists" the last 50 or so chapters or so where something really horrible happens to MC, only for some really weird deux ex machina events to make up for it, only for some sort of other handicap to stop it from being made up? What's that, a silver tier boon? 773 stat points? Lmfao no he's got a duaghta now. So it's just this snowball of it feeling like there is no progression. That handicap plot twist never actually gets resolved.

LordHailith

I dropped this story and will keep my subscription for the silver fox chapters. I hope the author does a major overhaul for the last several chapters. I can’t keep reading this fever dream plot. They are a fantastic author but this is just too much.


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