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Chapter 351 - A father's eternal regret.

🕑 Added 2023-10-04 03:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Fozzy

who, for just a heartbeat, shown so bright and beautiful in the ether before them, Correction: shone

Normannihilator

Overall I very much enjoy this story. That being said, the repeated name mix ups make it difficult to stay within the story flow painted in your mind as you read. Mixups between Tilgoth and Crevpost throughout the entire chapter, at one point from one line to the next, knocks you out of the flow pretty quick. This is a flaw with not only Eric's story, but with Alex's as well. Both within complete, published books, and these individual chapters. While I enjoy both stories too much to stop reading, it does make it difficult to follow the stories at times.

Goldfish2

Hmmm…..

Jon Lomax

thanks for the chapter. Time to stock up on new troops and cannons...


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