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Chapter 390 - Battle For Freetown: Part 12

🕑 Added 2024-01-26 03:59:00 +0000 UTC

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Antony Haynes

Caliban says, "I will never forget how much we owe you, my partner and friend," but this is the same Caliban who said his honor required him to defend the goblins/orcs back when Greed was allowing the Winter Queen to transfer Elven troops to Earth and this is the same Caliban who agreed to outlaw necromancy... Not sure Caliban's loyalty to Eric is anything Eric can count on in a crisis.

TechMagic

Eric and Alex again for the 800th time. Sigh. Dude, I really think you should do even the most basic of sanity reads over your work before publishing. I love the story but it’s getting harder and harder for me to defend a positive review when this is every single chapter multiple times.

Kitty

Yes, and for some reason it turned from a Silver Phoenix talisman to a Blue Phoenix?? I think perhaps you might want to slow your writing down just a smidge, so that you can get the facts right on the current chapter your working on. I also absolutely hate that everyone he rescues ALWAYS has to stop and ask how, why, or teach me please, about any skill they see him use... Why aren't they more concerned with getting the hell out of their tight spot??? Just shut up and run already!

Normannihilator

Eric and Alex are being mixed up in this chapter. This has already been pointed out, but it was particularly noticeable here, as in some cases, it was from one sentence to the next. At one point the same action was described as being done by Eric then Alex immediately following.

Nathan Smith

Tftc. Mixing up Erick with Alex in places


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