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Chapter 417 - Monster Surge IV

🕑 Added 2024-04-29 15:50:00 +0000 UTC

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Antony Haynes

At the beginning of this series, I'd hoped that we would see humans successfully repel the alien invaders from the rest of the galaxy (similar to Defiance of the Fall and other litrpg); however, it looks like that's not going to happen, since there are not enough human champions with bronze or higher power levels and since the average human power level is far weaker than the average alien power level. I'd also hoped that we'd see Eric make good on his oath to remove all orcs (and goblins?) from Earth--even if it required him committing genocide--but it looks like that won't happen either. Going forward, at a minimum, I'd like to see Freetown and it's territory no longer subject to goblin subterfuge or the risk of being taken over by some adversary, so that Eric can explore new areas we haven't seen before and conquer new territories. In addition, I'd like to see Eric build up a team of powerful lieutenants who are competent and able to carry some of the load of conquering territories. The decision to put Eric on the path of consumption (instead of dominion) seems to artificially limit him, since he can't hold territories, but I think the overall story is crippled if Eric cannot reliably "take over" territories--even if he has to "flip" them to Blue Corp faction. Overall, the sister (Elonia) plotline seems like a distraction from the main story (no matter how it's supposed to show sibling love) and the story would benefit from either making Elonia so powerful that Eric no longer has to rescue her (and her territories) or having her "retire" to some safe off-Earth planet. Ultimately, the story is getting too bogged down in having Eric endlessly run around trying to save his family, friends, and allies, rather than having allies strong enough to stand on their own. No matter how nefarious, insidious, or cunning the goblin faction is (even after having all their contracts invalidated and twelve of their planets eradicated), there has to be a practical counter. In the same way that one sword fighter can counter another, one barrister should be able to counter another--so where are the non-goblin barristers? Blue Corp faction should have a whole team of barristers on its payroll and Caliban should be able to use these barristers to counter goblin shenanigans. The story, overall, is strongest when Eric is delving dungeons, conquering territories, and eliminating the evil factions. It's fine for them to be powerful, but it's distracting for them to cause Eric constantly to have go back to square one. Let's advance the story!

Trevayne

A really nice continuation of the cliffhanger from the last chapter. Elonia was presented with a major, life-changing decision and we promptly get a chapter that is all Eric with no idea of what she decided or even if she could see Eric's exploits which would probably influence her decision. I think she will go for it, but will stay on the path of rulership so she can take territories instead of consuming them.


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