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Chapter 429 - Choice and Consequence

🕑 Added 2024-06-10 04:00:00 +0000 UTC

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James Rountree

So much for Freetown being safe at last im ready to give e up on these books

Michael Bracken

The transition to Luna needs to be smoothed out. Why do certain things work across identities but some don’t? This is very confusing for such a fundamental part of the plot. Please flesh this out more so the plot doesn’t feel so fragile. Love the story though, keep up the great work! Masterful stroke with the Bane play. Keep up the stress of that on Eric/Ernest/Luna

M.H. Johnson

Yes. He has a magic Silver Phoenix ring that allows him to disguise himself however he so wishes. He paid a crap-ton of Soul Points to lock in all the features so now makes use of it whenever he needs to slip past cams or sentinels :)

Chioke Nelson

I'm just confused. We have had Eric Silver, Ernest Slaughter, Spite Bane (which was awesome btw), and now Luna Archer? Do I have that right?

Trevayne

He has been Ernest "Edgelord" for a while now. I don't know if Luna Archer is going to be another semi-permanent change, or just a temporary measure so "she" can get a respite. I still have to wonder if at some point the galactic factions that have been trying to loot Earth will get reminded by their accountants that so far this has been a really losing proposition. First the Goblins, then the Augustines.

M van Dongen

Well that's different. No more Eric Silver?


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