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Chapter 460 - Charge of the Light Brigade

🕑 Added 2024-09-23 04:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Khan

Devoured the first few books, joined here to read as much as I could, but I can't justify continuing this cost. Same location, same scenes, over and over. A few chapters from now I'm sure he will lose everything again because the goblins have such thick plot armor it doesn't even matter.

MJR

I thought I would follow the author’s lead and just copy and paste with zero character development. “ This villain arc is getting too repetitive, too predictable, too boring. Rinse and Repeat killing sprees is just lazy storytelling. Sneaking in misdirections during the killing spree adds zero value to the core Arc. Let’s get to the end. Some true character development would be a nice change. - yawn”. 🥱

Stuart Jensen

I binge read the first three books and joined his patreon because I really enjoyed them. However I must admit its feel like he has lost his way and is just padding the story in circles now. I think there are easily 20 chapters that could be either removed or condensed as they are nothing but just word count filler. As he has set up so many story/ romance arc and then just forgotten them. For example : With the whole boom we are in a different time line ( Earth 616 Anyone?). And the battle scenes are getting very repetitive. Also the fact that we don't ever get any sort of resolution to any situation as we know for sure that there will always be another "crisis". Honestly in alot of ways it is as bad as alot of trashy daytime soaps. I am seriously considering cancelling my subscription.

Madzz

Good point. I get the feeling silvers aren’t used to being thwarted by white-tier annoyances. Maybe that’s why they keep kicking and screaming like toddlers? When someone takes away their toys they get pissy and rash. Aurelia was probably the most rational and calculating silver we’ve been introduced to so far. All the other ones seem like they’re so high on their pedestals that when they get knocked down their first thought is to obliterate whomever caused it. Kinda like the privileged young master in a cultivation novel who constantly yells, “You’re courting death!” the instant someone tells him he’s not actually that special lol.

derek sande

Has anyone watched "one piece" the anime? there is a point somewhere around 1000 episodes where it takes 60 episodes for the main char luffy to run from one end of the town to the other end to fight the boss. One of the most pissed of times in my life ever. Took a week before you got to see the next episode thinking the plot would move forward only to be more pissed off more after each week. Also each episode was also supposed to be like 24 minutes long but you only got 15 minutes because they wasted like 9 minutes on previous episode story recap and opening theme song (sometimes two) and ending theme song. This is also a similar feeling to now.

derek sande

I'm also getting very frustrated with the story as well. He has been in mostly the same location doing things over and over again for like 300+ chapters already. And every time plans are made none come to fruition. I dont like how every time he gains something, he loses almost everything shortly after from soul bound weapons, loot, gold, money, land, friends, 8+ love interests, the wind movement tome, etc. Its very annoying and upsetting. Its like " The Wonder Years" tv show where they would get to gether only to break up over and over. I hated that show never should have watched it. This series is starting to resemble the wonder years. Also Its taking way to long to finish the bugs off, it feels like 30 chapters or more that should have only taken 5. If every attack his solders kill as many or more bugs then it should almost double his number after ever hit. If his numbers double after every attack and he starts with 10k soldiers, then after 10 hits that's over 10 million solders.... why isn't he assigning more dread lords and sending them out to stop all the breach points, bunbun is also killing and raising the solders why doesn't she have 10 million by now? Is he going to even go to school? Or is that another thing thats never going to happen and we wasted all the time talking about it only for it to never happen like his martial art academys or destroying new York or robbing the other Bank vault. Or his tier 2 accession pod to help everyone class up that he's had since forever ago, or his towns at the 12 dungeons or his training towers from legend, etc.

chad osborn

Because why would long term thinking existences suddenly start behaving like immature short term thinkers all of a sudden. Who but the most desperate, on the cusp of losing everything leaders would take such a risk on an ascending planet event that world building stated wasn't that rare. So other opportunities are guaranteed to come

chad osborn

When will this enndddddddd? It's gotten old and boring. Can we get past the junk food portion that is fight scenes and actually move on with the plot please?????? The battle and the goblins meddling have overstayed its welcome as far as being a reader is concerned. Having Eric continually have to reclaim the same territory over and over and over again is tired and lazy writing. Why even world build to include the rest of the planet and other worlds in the system universe if you are going to keep your protagonist in what amounts to the same 5-6 counties of the state of New York that keep getting lost/or stay under threat? For all intents and purposes absolutely Noone in the local interstellar empire matters or influences the story other than Eric and Malificent. You have effectively written anyone else off that could give the story a breath of fresh air and give Eric a challenge in claiming the rulership/management of earth and you haven't even had Eric leave the New England area yet. How can you continue to think this was a good direction to take? Honestly what is the plan for when Eric reaches bronze and the only threat is Silver rankers to him? You already explained through world building that silver rankers are effectively faction/entire race leaders and are in control of multiple planets in some cases. Are we to believe that other than Malificent any other silver ranker will put their worlds and factions at risk in order to claim a newly ascending world in opposing Eric for it. Seriously even if earth is destroyed in the process who would risk Eric starting a vengeance tour and killing every faction that had a hand in it? Since powerwise Eric is somewhere in the low to mid silver power range right now.


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