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Chapter 531 - Formal Inquisition

🕑 Added 2025-05-30 04:00:01 +0000 UTC

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андрей ткач

No, they believe that the know better

Goldfish2

Where the fuck is all the bronze that Eric has hired and given to his buddies? The silver headmaster? Where are they? I’m sure more then dozens have already surrendered and serve yet they never appear. Also Evelyn doing subterfuge? Wow. I thought she was Eric in disguise. Also why tell Eric to run. Garbage half-a-dozen bronze when Eric hunts silver? Only more difficult with his handicap… which in all fairness…. Just make it more fun and challenging.

Jason Hutchins

Love a good plot twist with traps for the bad guys

Trevayne

I guess this shows one of the drawbacks of Eric using probability manipulation to repair disasters. The idiots seeking to rip Earth off again are no longer aware of the mistakes that got the previous bunch of idiots killed, so they keep trying.

chad osborn

It's okay to include characters that are indifferent or at least neutral to the MC's faction. 99.999999% of the world doesn't need to be antagonistic in order to write an interesting story and characters

chad osborn

Is the author incapable of writing us anything but the same recycled villains using schemes or being completely irredeemable? I get you as the author what to push some of what's happening in the real world into the story,but you completely overdue it. The shear lack of subtlety that you jam in the current political climate gets old especially when we as readers would like just a teeny tiny bit of escapism.

Iain Grubb

So Eve Death (the Empress no one seems to be recognising) wants him to kill 6 more corrupt Bronzes to either hit 100% on his core or fix his Cultivation issues?


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