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TMLoCL - Chapter 35

🕑 Added 2020-11-12 01:57:22 +0000 UTC

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Aesoir

I’d actually dump 90% of the adventure introduction info dump. It’s jarring, and kind of unpleasant to read, there’s no reason to introduce each person, their class and what not in one go. it would flow better if done more organically.

Markus

Here I thought I would be the first to point that out.

Nick

I think I agree with some of the other posts. Would prefer to see the zombie plant fight resolved before introducing the adventuring party. Cliffhangers are annoying :(

Mai0e

"... slack-jawwed guards... " -> slack-jawed

Jonathan Timm

She gets offered the dentist class as the molly herb is used to make toothpaste

cathia

finally someone understands. Well it wasn't spread just because of DnD, I think it is similar to swords, since swords became one of the symbols of hero figure and then they became so common, that people now think that they were main weapon everywhere, even thou they weren't that useful on the battlefield and were more of a day-to-day weapon

SV

It doesn't matter for the story but studded leather isn't a thing. It is thought to be a misrepresentation of brigandine that just spread throughout fantasy because of DnD. Great chapter by the way.

Master of Bunnies

I'm hoping our lovely main character ends up a dragon or something else that is insane. Though evolving back to a humanoid would also be good.

Critical Hit

I mean, aren't they almost certainly leaving their little town/village they are in now, and going out to do adventurer things, where they'll meet a little baby Wyvern fighting an adult Blood plant thing? Like, that's the entire point of this, to introduce them to us for when they meet her and she freaks out because she can finally interact with actual people, and oh god what if they just attack her? Be cool cadence be cool, don't freak them out, don't get stabbed! Oh god! DO I want them to know I'm as smart as I am, or not? What do I do!?!? Like, that's definitely the next chapter yeah?

Kevin Caffrey

I mostly agree, though I was excited to see that Cadence will be meeting some sentients soon. I was beginning to wonder if this life would be spent solo. One thing that stood out is the focus the author put on class types and combos, which makes me think it’ll be relevant for Cadence soon. Otherwise I agree, why else have those characters introduced now.

reji

Yep, she would get class Dragon Mount and become elf's pet. What else do you expect?

reji

Yep, better finish fighting and get full immersion instead of half bites. It's like burger without middle layer - only buns. Or two girls undress before you and they just leave. Better have one, but whole!

Michael Buchler

Great chappie! Can't wait to see how this pans out :)

Ethan Norton

I agree 100 percent. If they are gonna be main characters introduced them when it’s relevant, it’s not even close to relevant this chapter. But oh well it was Mildy interesting and this is my favorite story so keep it up!

Saaski

So, info-dump about about a whole group of people that I could not care less about just yet..... I would have rather have read more about how the fight with the zombie plant went, and then spent like a paragraph MAXIMUM hearing about those people now. Learning more about them naturally as the story went on. As of now, the only thing I remember about that whole section was that the narrator was an elf, which is rare around these parts. Bluntly put, I was fighting off yawns for much of the last part of this chapter, and I didn’t even bother to read the descriptions of the last two people. I love this story, but not this chapter.

Call0013

Guess we know what class she will be going for then since she already is a hunter and has Warrior and Scout as class options. I wonder if Fighting the Blood Moly will get her Herbalist as possible class option?

Patrick S.

Would be funny if she somehow ends as a pet to a member of this group 😂


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