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Chapter 25: In Sight

🕑 Added 2024-05-25 18:00:03 +0000 UTC

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S_Winter

Yep,I know what that's like. Try writing the chapter with a 3 year old running around... Though, to her credit, she's got used to going to daddy for things in the mornings at the weekends because 'mummy's working'

ManguKing

I gotta re read the chapter. Getting interrupted 2 much 2 comprehend properly. Everybody wants to talk when you dont wanna talk 😒

S_Winter

Ah, yes. It should be 'in his space'. Sometimes jumping between third-person, past tense in one story and first-person, present tense in the other can be a bit annoying. Better than if I try to do third-person present in one and past in the other, though - writing River's chapters in TD recently were difficult - I kept having to go back and correct my tense. But it's not omni-directional - recently I realised that I'd written a whole section of CR in first-person present and then had to go back and edit that too...

ManguKing

In my space? Is that a typo?


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