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Chapter 34: Being Honest

🕑 Added 2024-06-15 18:00:04 +0000 UTC

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S_Winter

Fair enough. I did consider carefully where I wanted to take it, and decided that, with how I've conceived of Nyx's character, treating her with suspicion from the outset would cause more problems later than I wanted to go into so I decided to take a different route.

S_Winter

Interesting that you've picked up on that. I'd say the difference is to do with him seeing magic and skills and so on more 'gamelike', or at least, he used to. They were things he had experience with, but only in fantasy novels, games, and films. So getting a magic spell was /cool/ and he didn't apply much critical thinking to it. However, he's fully aware that people can be shitty, and that everyone has their own motive. He is still quite young, so will probably be naive at times, but he knows enough about organised religion's mixed effects on the world, and so is wary of that here. That he's recognising Selessa as a sentient being worthy of being cautious about is an indication of how much his viewpoint on non-humanoids has changed since the beginning of this System.

ManguKing

Ok... at first I thought that the wolf was mentally manipulating the lionesses, but it makes sense for them to be more pragmatic. I still wish that they would have focused on the pride becoming stronger before giving more power to the wolves

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I like that Dominic has decided to put his paranoia aside. Personally I find it interesting how you have written him. I remembered when he got the magic lightning ability, I personally thought it was very reckless and somewhat needless risk to use the scroll right away... However here it seems he is more on the other end of the spectrum, kind of like as long as the risk is "self-inflicted" where he is the one to choose to take a skill or fight non sapient monsters Dominic is much more comfortable than when the other side is also capable of thought and reason. It may be a side effect of him essentially being completely in "control" since the system came. The only one really acting in ways not strictly "according to natural instincts" and now that changes.


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