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Anything she can do, I can do better - Full Story

🕑 Added 2020-01-01 02:04:55 +0000 UTC

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I can't even remember all of the details of this story, it's been so long. 😂 But I'm happy it gave you feels!

☺️ Thank you!

The last line was so sweet

LOL I'm teary eyed

Awesome job! Thanks for sharing ;)

Thank YOU TOO 🥰❤️

Literally could not afford to spend time doing this without you and everyone else here ❤️💙 So thank YOU!

Jealous supercorp is everything xD supercorp jealous of other versions of themselves is *chef's kiss* 🤣 I'm just thankful you write at all. Thank you so much for creating and sharing these ❤️

😂 Could prob write a million versions of jealous Lena and not get tired of it. (Same thing with jealous Kara, tbf). I wish I could write sequels to everything to be honest. I need so much more time to write. 😭 I'll put it on continuation poll pt 2! Thank you!

AAAAHHHH YET AGAIN! we love to see Lena jealous of herself lol the fluff at the end got my crying, pls write a sequel? What happens next? They need 'the talk' and then fuck some more 😂 thank you

The premise was a really great one! This patron's prompts are always excellent, so it's a win for me. :) I'm really happy that you loved how I interpreted it and that it entertained you while waiting for a flight, haha.

Sappho82

Holy moly this was FIYAH. I read this while waiting for a flight and I was shook lol. I loved the premise of Kara jetting off to Earth-33 to bang an alternate Lena and Lena getting jealous. Of course the premise is just one part of it, it needed your signature touch =) Loved Lena's jealousy and seduction and Kara being flustered. Everything about it was so delicious.

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked this! The dynamic I'd talked about with the patron was that Lena of Earth-33 was interested in sleeping with Kara, but not waiting around for her, or in love with her. I appreciate how you summed it up, since I didn't want to necessarily put Earth-33 Lena down to elevate Lena - just rather to highlight how Lena's connection to Kara is a richer and more emotional one. As for language, that's a relief to hear! I never want to be crude/trashy, but I do like to be rough and impactful.

I'm glad it was a welcome distraction before the end of work! Yeah, this was the fic I had in mind, but I'd be happy to write more if you or anyone else wants to submit other ideas for a future prompt poll. Happy New Year! And thank *you.* :D

Xev

Loved this one!! I rly enjoy how you went about Lena trying to 1-up Earth-33 Lena. Sometimes it’ll be a comparison that will put one down to put the other up (glass half empty kind of thing), but this one felt like just one being elevated without feeling like the other wasn’t inherently worse, just relatively not up to par. If that makes sense. Always love the language you use when you write. The sex reads rough and impactful, but not a kind of blunt/crude smutfest that feels trashy or cheap.

Bless you patron.

Jbzq21

Again I love when Lena teases Kara. Everything was hot. You know how to heat the room up with your amazing writing.

Jbzq21

My gosh! Here I am reading this near closing time in my job. I needed this. This is what you meant when you mention having a double Lena. I hope there is another you have cooked up. Happy New Year! Thank you again!


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