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Disobedience and Devotion - Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2020-01-07 22:52:54 +0000 UTC

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These two... are kind of a roller coaster and different from other iterations. 😂And now I want to continue the sequel. Thank you!

1 step forward, 1 step back, 2 steps forward....what direction will the next steps lead them??? Thanks for sharing ;)

I'll consider writing something from Kara's POV! The next chapter is from Lena's POV... because of something she does.

Would love to see a chapter from Kara’s perspective I have an inkling that she’s been into lena for a while.

Maybe I should have added that she also had to own it, lol. Lena had to make it look like a deliberate love bite she gave Kara, but then she opened up to Nia about it anyway and shocked her. Lena's still being petty though. Kara has an underlying respect for Lena in spite of what she said in chapter 2. Thank you for sharing your reaction.

Jbzq21

This too idiots already argue like an old married couple. Lena's pettiness knows no bounds in the beginning of the story. I was laughing that Lena owns what she did to Kara. Such a brat. The the smut got me really thirsty for how hot it is. I love how these two idiot fuels each others performance by being so stubborn. Make up sex is the best remedy for them. I like that Kara doesn't want to change Lena but embrace who she is. Thanks again for the story and more.✌

Thank you! I had both Victorian and medieval prose in mind while writing this, so that is probably accurate.

I'm really glad you did! There will be some trouble ahead, to go with the 'disobedience' portion of the title, but also growth between them and lots of smut. ;)

*offers you bottled water* Thank you! It's certainly possible.

I applaud you for reading nsfw content at work. That was really amusing to picture. Their bickering was a necessary evil to build up to the smut.. so if they're ever frustratingly argumentative in the future, you'll be prepared because it's leading up to something. Lol. Thank you!

GrouchyGritic

Love this! The old type language reminds me of game of thrones

Ohhh I loved it! I can definetly see Lena stirring up trouble for Kara but hopefully she can stop being so stubborn and see that Kara had genuine feelings for for her. I think that Kara just needs to make sure her seed takes root ;)

Bravo 👏🏾 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 that was scorching hot🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵I am parched, I tell you. I hope Kara’s seed takes.

Sappho82

during the first part i thought i was going to get an aneurysm from their stubborn bickering lmao. then it was go time, no holds barred ..! and i was like holy cow maybe i shouldn't read this at work, with my eyes bugging out of my head and leaning into my computer like i'm going to fall into my screen. Love how you're able to stick to the Victorian(?) style prose but still deliver that white hot ABO smut! bravo


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