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You and Me Make Three - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2020-02-11 02:42:41 +0000 UTC

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It really is a marathon, lol. Thank youuuu! :D Again I'm impressed by your ability to read this stuff when you're NOT at home. While I want their ruts to ramp up in the next chapter, the romance part of it and the softness between them is so important. Technically Rara is Red Daughter Kara, but I just gave her the fandom's name for her, instead of Linda Lee... because the name Linda just doesn't fit her personality. I'm so happy you enjoy how I write her!

Sappho82

Can I just say, that I adored the opening sentence of this fic. It introduced the scene but also framed it in the context of their sex marathon. I admire strong openings in chapters, and this one SLAPS. And the smut was...phew. I definitely felt naughty reading it, even though I was sitting at home! The way you wrote both Kara and Rara in a rut was just like a tidal wave of horny coming from all sides, and I like how you describe it as just the three of them feeding off of each other. But also, the whole thing still felt..tender? Lena being spoiled by her two alphas is a delicious concept and you're killing it with this one. You've developed Rara as a real and rounded character too, and that's pretty impressive, for an OC. Anyway another great job!!!

I totally want to answer your questions but you'll find out in the next chapter! :) I thought the one on one moment was important to include, so even though there was a specific winner on that poll for Kara and Rara entering in a rut, I had to throw in the other scene, too. Thank you!

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Thanks, JB! They're not exactly subtle, are they? I am happy you liked the chapter!

Ohhh will they tell her or let her find out on her own?? I hope you wrote them being all protective and paranoid and then trying to explain thier behaviour to Lena when she scolds them and I'd bet it would be Rara that would accidentally let it slip and not even notice. I loved this update and it was nice to have a little one on one between Kara and Lena :) Thank you for this amazing update.

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 she pregnant

Jbzq21

As always amazing. Lol! I bet I have an idea on what those two are hiding. Phew that smut was an amazing ride. Lena is the goat being able to take both supers. Thanks again.


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