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🕑 Added 2020-01-19 02:10:15 +0000 UTC

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So good! Thanks for sharing ;)

Blake

just had to re-read this after reading a similar mating run fic awhile ago and ugh i can't wait for the next chap!

Well, that's good news, because there will be a second part coming soon! ;)

LittleHyde

Okay, I LOVED this 😍😍

Thank you! I really enjoy writing them with soft feelings for each other. I'll have to think of some fluffy stories for the future. Let me know if you have any ideas for that!

Awww, it was really sweet, I like the fluff in their relationship in this story and how they really like each other. I mean I like the angst in the other stories but I also enjoy when they're cute and sweet and the angst comes from outside factors, not between them. It's good to see there's not tension and arguing between them and they fight together against the external problems.

From what I researched on mating runs, there's some potential for alphas to be terrible, so I figured Kara could beat them up. I find Lena and Lillian's relationship pretty interesting, especially after last night's episode! Wouldn't mind including her in more stories. I'm sure this Kara & Lena will have a long and happy life together, fighting against injustices and taking all kinds of risks together. Thank you!

That's awesome, because confession: I had no idea what a mating run was beforehand... so this was the result of about 5 minutes of googling. Lol.

I'm thrilled you loved it, especially the part with Lillian.

Jbzq21

Hahaha. This strange tradition worked out in the end for Lena. All the other alpha's pride went to trash after they got destroyed by someone they thought was weak. Good thing Kara kicked Lockwood in the grapes. Lots trash guys in the show need a beating. So many to name. Glad Lillian cares in her own way😑. It really sucks in that society that the only way to seem alpha is to be a brainless asshole like those other alphas. Lena's seductive powers show itself. Now I won't be surprise if these two will have sex in the risk of getting discover. The smut as always is superb. Thanks for this story and the next to come.😊

Hallelujah!! I’ve been craving mating fics and this delivered 🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

I loved every second of this. I a thoroughly enjoyed watching Lillian eat crow :P


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