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Half God, Half Devil

🕑 Added 2020-03-14 20:18:16 +0000 UTC

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Thank you! I'm going to mail this to the SG writers so they have something to do while they're on break. (Just kidding, of course). Lena is 100% power bottom for this story - both Lenas, actually. I think you'll probably like Chap. 2, as it's heavy on one of your fave elements... :)

Girl, yes. All of this!!!

Sappho82

Goodness gracious. That sex scene YEETED ME TO THE MOON. It was just so intense and like 👀👀👀Overlord Lena is a Force To Be Reckoned With, and I really love her strategy of 'I will mock and taunt Red K Kara until she rails me within an inch of MY LIFE.' Overlord Lena is just out here living her best life, and I feel like she's the true Lena we all want and deserve. Her 'I will fuck up the time space continuum just to snatch this version of Supergirl who i want to bang me so hard, it might shatter my pelvis' vibe just feels so...Lena. I beg you, please share this with the SG writers, so that they be inspired. Thank you for writing this, you are a treasure, I have never eaten so good

It gets hotter?! Part of me is like it’s not fair for you to kill me, but on the other hand I’m really excited?!

Sappho82

lmao 911 for Boa please

Sounds like a plan, and in preparation for the next one, I'll just say get the crash cart out. :)

I’m not being hyperbolic in the least when I say this fic is the one for me. Like this broke my scale. I needed a crash cart and a full medical team to bring me back, this was THAT good I’m still sweating every time I think about it.

I’m on my like two dozenth reread, and I’ve determined that we need a swoon scale for fics starting with a little touch of smelling salts/fainting couch on one end and chest compressions/defibrillator on the other

So like, that’s the written rules, but this is a negotiation, ma’am

Lmao. All it will take is a continuation poll where people vote for more of this particular story.

Thank you, and no, you weren't imagining it! I realized a little late that the idea I had would need to be divided into at least two parts. There will be multiple Lenas and Karas in the next one.

They can be intense and rough, but Overlord Lena definitely needs some healing out of their relationship too. :) Not that she will admit it. Red K Kara is also softer than she probably appears in this current moment. They're still going to be wild in the next part, but there will be a few instances where Red K Kara is going to show she's listened to everything Overlord Lena has said and is forming a strong bond to her. When Overlord Lena and Red K Kara go to this other timeline, they're not going to take Lena and Kara's places -- they're going to co-exist alongside the other Lena and Kara.

Yes, that was definitely an intentional propping-up of the "they're soulmates" perspective. :)

For this story, I'm interpreting Lena's anger in the main timeline much differently than I am in End Simulation - and we're just going to conveniently shove William aside for our purposes here. I'm thrilled you had a good time reading it in between moving! I hope all of that goes smoothly.

Damn that was good! Maybe it’s in part two or maybe I totally made it up but somehow I thought there would be multiple Karas and Lenas in the smut? Like kind of a mini orgy? Cause no lie I’d kill to see multiple Alpha!Karas give Lena some attention ☺️☺️😍😍

Lena is content after sex. This create happy feelings for me. I like her being happy and relax and comfortable after all she have been through. Like she can finally let go some of her hurt. Like she trust Kara enough even though she didn't know her. That shit is soulmate stuff. And Kara can see it in front of her eyes, how Lena just be herself for a moment, it is a really intimate moment between them and I just like that a lot. She can see how Lena is underneath all her high walls and iron layers. Kara need to protect this precious being with all her might. I want to see how it is going to go when they go to try taking over the timeline. Mainly the interact between the good and bad self. Do another Kara just replace the Red-K Kara after she join Lena or they go to another timeline?

Also, how sexy that no matter how troubled their souls always recognize each other!! Chef’s kiss!

What would it take to turn that might into a definite? A care package of chocolate? My third born child?

Jbzq21

Wow! The anger and sextual tension was all over the place. Damn these two.dark idiots don't play. Lena always have the right words to say to piss Kara off and get what she wants in the same time. All the delicious sex she will have. Wish by the way was crazy hot and sexy. Got me going when Kara threw her out the window just to have sex in the couch lol. I'm just wondering how part 2 will be? Since that timeline is from the show.? Lena is still mad and Kara is busy being force to more trash. Anyway love every minute I read this. Nice read taking break while moving. Thanks again.😝

She might, she might.. ;)

Also, ser/ma'am? LOL. Ma'am. It was interesting writing the dialogue for these two. Hopefully they still really felt like Supercorp, even though they're both more extreme.

Also:let👏🏾RedK!👏🏾 Kara👏🏾claim👏🏾Overlord👏🏾Lena👏🏾2020

By all means, continue. :D Are you alright... can I get you a complimentary glass of water? Lol. I'm happy you enjoyed this one!

Imma be back later cuz I’m too much of a mess to be coherent or professional right now. I do not need to blow up your notifications with my gibbering. But I am a puddle right now ON GOD!!!!

When Kara said “sit down Lena we’re negotiating”!!! SER/MA’AM, WHO GAVE YOU THE RIGHT TO END ME?????!!!!

Oh god, oh shit, oh fuck. I wish I could gif my feelings right now because this made me feral. I’m dead. Tell my family I loved them. Oh god.

RIP ME!!!!!!!!!🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾


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