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V's Not Just for Victory - Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2020-03-23 20:01:27 +0000 UTC

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Thank you! I'm really into the enemies to lovers dynamic because of all the potential for tension and bickering. :)

LemonyBuns

I cant get enough of the sexual tension between them while also trying to keep up the rivalry and not be jealous. With all the sauciness add this story is amazing, looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm glad it gave you feels. And that you like all of the jealousy and Luthor scheming, haha. Kara's not really a jerk, which will be clearer soon... she showed restraint with Kate. With any luck, all of the hard work of the experts studying the virus will reap rewards/better treatments... Last night's chat was fun - I hope everyone's looking forward to the next one. :)

The skyrocketing sexual tension had to go with skyrocketing feelings, otherwise it's just hate sex and underneath it all they need to have that deeper connection. Thank you!

Jbzq21

Got me feeling all times of things.I love Lena being her usual bratty self. Her devious plan to get Kara was jealous was a win. Kara was going to demolish Kate but I'm sure she knew Lena was stoking the flames. Lena being a genius sweet brat always get to me. The tension of jumping each other is gold and Kara hiding the journal was halirious. Good thing Kara acting like a jerk is only a mask. Thank you for the story. For this self quarantine hopefully to long but atleast now I won't miss chat day.

My god the sexual tension in this chapter is just amazing! Really fucking hot! But I’m glad the feelings are sneaking in too and I love the jealousy!

Hello and thank you. :D

Lmao yeah they have genuine feelings under all of the horniness and aggression. There will be more jealous Kara coming up. :) "Finally do the thing," lol.

Hello. Yes. Thank you. That’s all.😁

They are both acting like horny kids with hormones running around and can't control themselves lol. Still it is surprising to see Kara cared about Lena while they are mostly humping each other and forced herself to stop. I love jealous Kara, she is so easy and Lena is having too much fun because of this XD. Still I am impressed with Kara self control cause she didn't rip Kate head off when she continuously flirting with Lena. It was a really fun read, looking forward to the next chapter when they finally do the thing 😏

Thank you! I had some "sheltering in place" readiness distractions while writing this, so I'm glad the food wasn't overcooked or lacking enough salt. ;) I mean, regarding the jealousy, *maybe* I am. I do aim to serve! And when people tell me they like something, I remember it, and when an opportunity presents itself... That makes me incredibly happy - if I can make quarantine more bearable in any way with my stories, let me know. You didn't miss it! She didn't explain. She just let Lena rain down on her with rage. You'll find out why in chapter 4. :)

Meanwhile Sam is like, "?? But do you like Kate?" because it's unfathomable that Lena could ever like Kara. I'm glad it made you laugh!

I am glad you liked all the things in the chapter!

They're taking some baby steps towards understanding one another. :)

Sappho82

So this chapter was everything. 🙌 🙌 🙌I knew it was going to be good, I knew I was going to eat well, but I didn't expect that it was going to be a veritable feast. So much good stuff, it’s amazing all the things you were able to shove in here. My favorite stuff in this chapter: 1. Kate Kane as unwitting rival. Yes. Yessss. So much yes. And Lena flirting back to make Kara jealous, but maybe it worked too well. Kara getting mad, “here are your condoms, use them with Kate!” Delicious. Ugh. It’s like you’re writing to my jealousy kink or something. 2. Lena as woman scorned, and her underhanded way of getting back at Kara. The volleyball match with the alphas losing their collective mind was hilarious and super entertaining. 3. Lena not being able to keep away. The ensuing fight and when they simultaneously jump each other’s bones 4. The porn with feelings where they somehow confess all their love…ugh. God. This is why I read your fanfiction, it’s like a balm to the soul!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, and you have blessed my bleak quarantine existence!! Also, I don't know if I missed it, but Kara doesn't explain to Lena why she stood her up? You had said that Kara was going to be held up by some people getting drunk….did you decide to cut that part out?

Blake

also forgot to mentioned i loved the teasing with the innuendos! i was cracking up. hope to see more that while kara kinda dangles it around for lena and others haha. also liked the jealous kara scenes and lena eating it up

Jealousy, athleticism, sex, feels yes yes yes

Blake

i see! and yeah i really hope they talk more about it especially to avoid misunderstandings. hope we can see these two official soon!

And here I thought you were going to be sad they didn't sleep together yet... well, go all the way, I mean.

Thank you!!! The chapter went a bit differently than I'd had in my head, but the exploration of feelings is important for the next parts. :)

I think Patreon has rate-limited my ability to like peoples' comments since the start of the month. Just randomly mentioning that in case anyone's wondering why I don't leave likes on comments anymore. I clicked the little heart like 3 times and it doesn't want to stick. Anyhow, it's definitely important that they express their feelings at this point--at least a little bit. Kara had to toss that journal quickly for important reasons. :) Also, glad you liked Kate's part in it. And hey, there's Sappho... !

Sappho82

Girl my soul has been ejected from my body, I have ascended from this mortal coil and am currently circling the earth as a spectral ghost

Blake

loved this update!!!! so happy how they both seem to be on the same page now with their feelings and they'll take more about it!!! ofc this chapter was super hot too!!!

Hoo Lordy! I’m feeling very warm in this chili’s tonight!!!🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵. First off, I’m so excited that they actually talked feelings and were vulnerable with each other. I’m also a teeny bit sad that Kara actually tried to hide that she journals 😢. Their chemistry is off the charts as usual and I loved Kara being jealous of Lena flirting with Kate and giving her her number. Second, has anyone checked on Sappho? Is homegirl still in this universe after this update?


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