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V's Not Just for Victory - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2020-05-15 13:52:53 +0000 UTC

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Jbzq21

Woah! Cockblock much Eve. This chapter had a bit if everything a nice b ball game, sexual tension, and jealously. The foreplay was such a nice moment. I want some of that pizza too. These two are definitely more frustrated now. Kate haves to back up before she gets KOed. 😆 This is one of my favorite enemies to lovers stories. 🥰🥰🥰❤

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Yes, the cockblock served the purpose for the character exposition, for Lena finding out who Kara really is - and if everyone's frustrated because of it, imagine how frustrated Kara and Lena are gonna be in the next chapter when they finally do it. :)

Well, I can't finish it if I'm in jail...

This was my original plan for the story, to have a big build-up, and I almost decided to shuffle things around for the sake of getting to the smut sooner, but the day of reckoning will come. I'm happy you laughed.

Xev

I can’t believe this is a case of cockblocked *because* of open communication (darn you eve for your integrity this time! But yay on the character exposition ;] ).

You and me both Sappho!!!

Girlllllllllllllllllll! You are fucking with us. I’m gonna call the👮‍♀️ 🚔 on you cuz this is a hate crime.

Blake

ohhh that sounds neat! and it'd be nice to revisit that world (or any of the sc fics you wrote) once more if you have inspiration to add a filler chap of the sort

I should say, I have an ending in mind for Chapter 5, but I can always be convinced to write additional chapters to whichever stories. I'll just write them as either one-off installments, or additions that include something that reads like another ending...

Blake

man sad to see this one go. truly one of my favs from you. but all good things come to and end! and i know you'll make many more amazing stories anyway!

Sappho82

lol i was super sure that this chapter was going to include Kara shooting a 3 pointer into Lena that I was just shook. But this chapter had me lolling, Eve is such a thot. And oh wow when Kate just copped a feel that was intense. And their foreplay, before it was rudely interrupted by Eve's TMI, was such a nice reversal of their earlier sexual interactions. Like hate sex is my jam but this I loved that they turned the corner on enemies to lovers!! anyway i'm really looking forward to true day of reckoning

Yeah, I'll be wrapping up the story very soon - one of my goals for the month. :)

Blake

so happy we'll get another chap soon! eve was such a cockblock. but it'll be nice to see lena gush about kara now with someone so three cheers to that!

Don't worry, Sappho - the next chapter is coming ASAP, and I promise it will make up for you and Kara getting blue balled.

Sappho82

Okay wait omg...*scrolls down aggressively* 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 is this another cruel joke???? just gonna leave me high and dry???? oh my godddddd i got blue balled i cant believe it 😭😭😭😭😭😭 i dont deserve this im a good person who recycles and saves squirrels


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