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Bloodlines

🕑 Added 2020-08-09 17:10:46 +0000 UTC

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Thank you! 💙

GreerDanville

I really enjoyed this one, as always.

This one is sooo good. I hope 🤞🏾 we’ll get a part two soon.

Yeah, there's definitely the potential for a fun forbidden love storyline here. :) We'll see what happens when I add it onto the poll if everyone wants a continuation. Lena's definitely undergoing some changes due to being Kara's mate. I imagine they're going to have to use a lot of scent maskers to hide their relationship and activities. Thank you!

Never expected a vampire x werewolf to be so good. It is a nice spin on Lex to be the one planned the ambush. Of course only he will do something this crazy. Oh yes, love the forbidden love and how they still dive into it no matter what. Lena just can't resist the oh so big and strong alpha and purposefully go out and search for her LMAO. I wonder can Lena get pregnant though with her being an undead? Is she somehow becoming alive after mating with Kara? It will be hard to hide their hard "workout" though with the vampires and especially worewolves with their enhance sense of smell XD. Anyway love to see them have more secret meeting for some wilderness workouts 😋

Um? Lol.

hmmm.. 🧛🏻‍♀️

Thank you! 😊I'm really thrilled you enjoyed it so much!!!

Blake

yess i really hope you can expand on it more. i'm such a sucker for secret and forbidden romances and like again hot subby vampire lena?!?! literally every lesbian's wet dream lmao

Thank you! 😊

Aww, thank you! 😊That makes me so happy. There's definitely the possibility of developing the secret romance further if everyone's interested in a continuation. I'll do a poll soon.

There's definitely potential for a continuation. I have a plan and a longer story in mind if there's interest. 😊

This was absolutely amazing to read! And that was one of the most in depth and exotic sex scenes you have written. Amazing!!!

Aro

Oh, I hope for more. This was amazing!

Thank you! This didn't have a slow build up either because I wanted it to work as a one-shot but I'm happy you liked my take on it. If Kara hadn't been a lycan already embroiled in the conflict, it would have taken many chapters, but I could see Kara just reacting on the spur of the moment and doing what she did to protect Lena. I'm guessing the main guy in the movie was put there just to make an average real life dude feel powerful seeing a normal guy get lots of powers and the girl. Thank you! I almost had them go to a cabin but that would have slowed everything down. Lol. There's a possibility for a sequel.

Blake

ohhh man this i knew i had high expectations for this and as always you go above and beyond!!! the story is super cool. the whole forbidden love with vampire and wolf and the sex itself *chef's kiss* loved it. i definitely need more chaps of this!

WildSolace

Oh yes... with his face cut on the diagonal with that stupid shocked expression!!!

Awesome, I'm happy you enjoyed it, especially since you submitted the idea to do Underworld! The plot kind of came to me immediately after getting the prompt and I considered doing it differently, but it probably would have ended up being a slower burn/drastically different. Kara is kind of a cupcake, despite being all tough alpha. Thank you! I love writing across all genres and I hope I will eventually get to write many different kinds of stories on here. Stay safe, too! 💙🌈

YASSSSSSS!!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️please say this will be continued 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺I need them to overthrow Lex and for Lena to cut his fucking head off.

Jbzq21

I'll say your Underworld story was more engaging and interesting than the actual movie. On the movie they just force the too main leads together with no build up at all and was just a typical Het relationship. I'm not even surprise Lex is one of the asshole leaders and glad Kara was a Lycan already and had reason to do the things that she did. That's one of the reason why I didn't like the main guy in the movie. He had no underlying ties and no internal conflict with the Lycan and Vampires and leaves him disconnected through the whole movie and is just a love interest with the hybrid powers.😒 Anyway I love the rough animalistic forest smut. It was spicy and roughtastic. It was amazing just them not caring at all. Lena couldn't resist Kara even if she tried.🥰🥰🥰🤣 The ending seem open ended but I don't mind that it was a one shot.🥰🥰

I have some ideas for a part 2 if everybody wants that! Thank you! 😊

You blew any expectations I had for this story away. This was beyond what I thought it would be. It was marvelously done. You wrote this so beautifully I could picture all of it so vividly in my mind especially the smut. Lena and Kara fucking in the forest like animals. Really enjoyed how Lena took control and wasn’t the typical submissive omega. Kara’s confession of Lena being her one and only omega. This whole story was stunning loved it all. You have an amazing range for writing and I’m happy to be reap the benefits of your astonishing talent. Thank you so much for this and please stay safe. ❤️💙❤️💙😊👍🏻👍🏻☺️

WildSolace

Please tell me this is just chapter 1, because that was fucking amazing. Like for real. Great work!


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