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Dirty Dealings

🕑 Added 2020-11-10 03:31:03 +0000 UTC

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Thank you! You're reading everything so fast, I've just gotten the chance to reply to these!

Love it! Thanks for sharing ;)

Might have been channeling Disobedience and Devotion with the quiet love part. I feel like quiet pining might actually be a thing in a lot of my historical AU stuff. I'm evaluating. 😊TYVM! 💙❤️

The quiet love Kara has for Lena paid off well in the end and that's my favorite part here despite the wonderful smut you delivered here. 💖

I'd like there to be more opportunities for Kara to punch Lex. :) The story went pretty differently than I thought too. I saved the alternative scenes in another doc so maybe I'll piece them in at some point and reveal the other way it could have gone, haha. Yeah, I figured it'd be beneficial for Lena to have some backstory with Kara for this one, since they were just jumping in bed together. I guess they could have also been strangers... Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Jbzq21

Kara delivered the falcon punch to Lex face. I was like "Damn Kara"! That was well deserve. 🤣🤣This went differently than I thought. So all this time Kara was pining and never giving a chance to approach Lena. These useless gays. Great thing Kara kept all of Lena's belongings to show her affection. Lena was like, "nah I'm losing my v card my own way" and in the best alpha. I love all the intimate smut that happened.🥰🥰 Thanks and onto the next.

I'm so glad! It's fun writing a pining Kara in historical AUs. Kara definitely got blue knotted when Lena interrupted them, lol. Lex deserved that punch and then some. I feel like so much of this story was focused on build up and their moments alone together. I've been meaning to write more fics where there's a mutual claiming... not sure why I haven't until now. Oh well, this Lena and Kara definitely live happily ever after, as they should in every verse. 😊Thank you, and you stay safe too! 💙❤️🌈

I loved this story. Of course Kara had a crush on Lena when they were younger and of course Lena had feelings for her as well. These two idiots I swear useless gays. It was really sweet and thoughtful of Kara to purchase all of Lena’s beloved possessions and have them in safe keeping for her. Their first time was hot and oh my gosh I was kind of frustrated as I imagined Kara probably was when Lena interrupted their intimate moment. Damn Kara really showed Lex who was boss. Finally when they got to properly consummate their bond. It was so beautiful and passionate. I really enjoyed how they both surrendered to their love for each other and Kara and Lena both giving each other mating bites was the cherry on top of this deliciously smutty story. I can only imagine they would both live happily ever after with a significant amount of adorable children. Thank you so much for sharing this it was an amazing read. As always please stay safe ❤️💙🤩👍🏻👍🏻

Blake

ohh yes please do. i'm all for kara courting lena and lena acting all elegant and coy. it'd be great if you can add comedy to the mix too!! like 3 cheers for gentleman kara in a suit and lena in all the princess like dresses. i'd swoon

Thank you! Always happy to deliver a Lex beat down when he's being a slime ball. 😊

Thank you! Now I want to write another period piece involving courtship, lol. But I need to write some comedy first. :)

It went in a different direction than I thought, too! Lol. I actually cut a scene out where Kara gambles with Lex, Edge and Otis Graves, because it seemed like it was supposed to be a surprise to Lena that Kara wins. Maybe I'll share an alt version of it at some point. Thank you!

That uppercut was very satisfying!🙌🏾🙌🏾I love it when Lena takes her own fate into her hands. I got a little teary at Kara rescuing her things 🥺

Blake

i second flamer's comment. quite a different direction but just perfect for our gentleman kara to save their girl. would love to see a pt 2 and kara's promise to court lena

Ohhh this went in a different direction then I thought. But I love it, bashful Kara is kind of my favorite, AND she gets to layout Lex. 😍 thanks for sharing this!


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