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The Best of Both Worlds

🕑 Added 2021-01-09 23:09:23 +0000 UTC

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Yeah, I'm sure it was hard on Lena, and also on Kara. I don't think she always wanted to continue being two totally different people with Lena. 😞 It's one of the interesting things to explore in this story.

I've always been on Lena's side in the whole thing about being mad at Kara for not telling her her secret, but having a story from only Lena's POV, where Lena experiencing such different relationships with Kara and Supergirl gives me a better idea of ​​how cruel was Kara was with her.

Poor Lena! Kara had the chance to be honest, now it's going to come back to bite her even worse! Thanks for sharing ;)

Thank you! You know, I almost wrote the third chapter from Kara's POV, but then decided against it. But it's certainly a possibility in the future. She's definitely in agony half the time, and the rest.. well.

Such a great fic. I’m still laughing at Lena calling out Kara’s name midcoitus. Just hilarious. Would love to see some of Kara’s point of view on all this. You give us great clues to her headspace. The line with Kara’s eyes going lifeless when Lena confessed the plot at Noonan’s was chef’s 😘. I can tell it’s agonizing her that she can’t be with Lena as Kara.

Yeah, the next part will be up this weekend on account of demand! 😂

Thank you! Might be having too much fun with the Supergirl and Lena tension. It's just... really enjoyable to have a fic where it's both enemies and lovers at the same time. 😂This fic had me on edge this week as I wrote a continuation, ngl.

Yes, please continue this one!

Sappho82

This was fantastic. The tension between Supergirl and Lena is off the charts!! Just love love how you write Lena getting railed lol. Tis an art form you have perfected. I see a lot of drama and heartbreak unfolding when the reveal happens though, like End Simulation level. Oooof. Angst, ahoy!!!

Oh man, imagine if the reveal was during Lena’s heat or something 💀💀 the angry sex 👁👄👁

Thank you so much! 😊I referred back to a couple of different seasons while writing this to help with separating them out. I figured with all of Supergirl's powers, she should totally make good use of them during sex. There will probably be more because there are still things to resolve!

Yeah, when the prompt said "Supergirl" instead of Kara, my brain spat out this whole interpretation involving season 3 Supercorp tension. 😂 Thanks brain for that, because now it's all kinds of complicated. I re-watched a lot of scenes while I was writing so maybe it's intentional? It's probably weird but I have certain clips I watch for certain fics. Lol. 3x19 and 4x17 have really good Supercorp tension scenes. Thank you very much! I try to make every scene feel different than the last. Have a great day and stay safe! 💙🌈

Yes, I understand the cringe - the amount of times I was like, "Kara just tell her" 😂 Thank you and I *think* there will be more.

I totally get what you mean - you made perfect sense at 3 am. All of those concerns were in my head while writing this and I've worked out what I foresee happening if I write more chapters -- though if I do, I want it to be asap, haha. Stay tuned for more info on that.

Thank you! 😓Yeah, I realized that my interpretation of the prompt made it more complicated than expected and it might require more. We'll see how that goes, because I have no shortage of ideas. At least it was a productive weekend of writing. 😂

Haha, but Lena's also lying a lot in this story and her lie started their whole complicated relationship. 😊 I did? Well, thank you! Sometimes I stare at my writing and wonder if I've gotten worse. I know, it bothered me too that Kara didn't just tell her, so I had to come up with a justifiable reason for her behavior and really think on it. Thank you! I hope your year is going great so far!

I know, it's a complicated mess. 😂You are totally right about this having some comedy potential though.

Rocket

Oh gosh but this was really good. I love the way you write the duality of Kara/Supergirl and Lena’s interaction with the two of them. And hanging air sex!! That’s a new one and really kinda ingenious there. Damn I hope there’s gunna be a part two I wanna know if Kara comes clean or if Lena figures out she’s been claimed by the alpha she REALLY wants!

This was very hot and downright erotic. I mean Lena getting railed by Supergirl during that tension during season 3 was a great setting to this prompt. I wonder how Lena would react to knowing it was Kara she was mating with all along. Kara definitely acts like two different people in this story. Had you told me Kara and Supergirl are two different characters in this story I would have believed it. (Which I do believe was intentional?) This was a different and great take on the Kara/Supergirl and Lena dynamic they had in season 3. I can definitely see the potential for a continuation of this specific story arc. Spectacular writing you really do have natural talent for writing smut. Rest assure we all definitely appreciate you sharing your writing with us. As always please stay safe. ❤️💙🤩👍🏻👍🏻

Ok, I love this and I hope there’s gonna be a continuation!! But also DAMN the cringe i feel is just like watching s3

Oh no. Please continue with this. We need to know how Lena's heat goes on and if Kara will give in in a heated moment to tell her the truth. Or just blurt out "I love you". Every time I see a fic with Lena/Supergirl relationship I get a little queasy because I don't think it could ever work out. It's just Lena living together with Kara as Supergirl would out her some day. Such pressure on both of them. As Kara/Lena that's no issue. If you get what I mean. It's 3am and I can't sleep.

Oh hot damn and blast the fucking was amazing oh my god. I hope you’ll continue cuz I just have to know how this works out between them. Will Lena and Kara fuck with Lena still not knowing she’s supergirl? Will she feel guilty? Will she have absolutely jerry springer levels of drama wondering if she’s pregnant with supergirl or Kara’s baby???🤯🤯🥴 I need to knoooooow. Will Kara risk it all and confess??? Tell us? Preferably in like 3 more 10k installments.

Jbzq21

Woah ho ho! The dilemma of the way Kara treats Lena she's either Super or Kara. It no wonder Lena feels betrayed and piss when she learns then truth but she sorta of already knew deep down in her boxes. I feel that you got better righting smut Sextual. The dirty talking will melt anyone who reads it.🥰🥰😝 The moral dilemma Kara digs herself in regarding Lena about her identity is so dumb when you think about it. Again thanks you for this an hope you have a great new year.🥰🥰

WildSolace

This feels like it needs a sequel cause now it would be great to see how this very complicated entanglement gets settled. Plus all of the funny missteps and crazy sex so much fun to be had.


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