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Piece of cake

🕑 Added 2021-02-24 15:41:48 +0000 UTC

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That's the biggest compliment because I was in severe pain while writing this, let me tell you. 😂I'm so relieved it didn't suck. 🎉Thank you!

Whoo that was hot!! This was dirty and sexy! Loved every second of it. The neediness and dirty talk was amazing and you never once over did it. You teased it perfectly ! Zx

@Cliterature Though with the translation stuff, with how you have your stories often have the chars speaking other languages, would you consider doing a translation table at the end of the story/chapter?

@Cliterature Don't worry about the linguistics, I was just trying to figure it out initially for my own fun! Doyle's Kryptonian has case markers AND vowel harmony AND incomplete (sometimes conflicting) documentation so it's a hell of a ride. And it's not like there are any native speakers.... in this universe. I can totally give you tips on stuff like what certain linguistic terms mean if you want to dive in, tho. And since Kryptonian is an incomplete conlang you can definitely make some shit up.

Good thing I thought to ask, eh? Now you have a resource and ally to call on for future stories.

Well, thank you for doing the extra legwork to figure it out! I didn't think anyone would care about the Kryptonese so I didn't spend a lot of time on it. But I'll keep in mind I have a linguistics major reading my stories. 😉

It took a fuckton of work to figure this out because kryptonian.info apparently had a lot of extra grammar articles in the past that never made it to the current version, but the correct translation is probably ":zhehiod gampilahm", with VERB-ahm meaning "person who does VERB". You can see -ahm in the words for "savior", "researcher", and "killer". My linguistics undergrad degree will never let me go.

I'm so relieved you enjoyed it because I was legit wincing while writing some of the smut and I was worried it wouldn't be sexy at all, lmao. At some point in the future I think it'd be fun to write a fic with more Lillian / grand children scenes. 😅Thank you, today I do feel a bit better!

Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed the execution of your prompt! It was a fun one to write and I loved the birthday element of it. Kara and Lena will definitely fill the Luthor mansion with all of their kids. 😂 Yesterday was probably the worst day, but today I do feel a bit better, thank you! ❤️

If only there was a Kryptonese dirty talking dictionary, I'd make use of that. 😂

Thank you very much! 💙 I'm so sorry to hear you've had surgery recently and I hope you are feeling better now! 😭 Regarding the Kryptonese: She calls Lena "Life bringer." I just had this feeling that this version of Kara would have a very personal, worshipful pet name for Lena in her native tongue. Especially since there are so few Kryptonians left and this is a way for her species to continue. They didn't have the word "bringer" so I found the Kryptonese international phonetic alphabet to add the "er" - 😊

It's such a sin that they made her an awful mom again in Earth Prime. Thank you! They definitely will.. some day maybe I'll write that fic where they have like 12 kids. 🤓

Thank you! I'm enjoying writing her lately, esp. because she's in like 3 other things I've been working on. 😊

Ngl, that nursery rhyme totally inspired this. 😂They will probably go through the entire list of L names.

Holy shit, that was amazingly hot! Laura is so damn cute and I am extremely fond of Lillian and her advice! This was really wonderful, great job! I hope you’re feeling a lot better!

I tried taking a look but I'm unsure the exact conjugation for the verb "gampil", here (dunno what source was used but the -euhr ending isn't on krytonian.info, and the word order used is different too). I seems something like "LIFE GIVE-(some conjugation)" -> "I'm going to give you life", or more crudely "gonna give you a baby" or maybe "gonna give you my seed".

Finally getting round to reading this in full after consuming snippets of it during the day. I absolutely loved it! Your writing is extraordinary as usual, when I suggested this prompt I couldn’t have expected it to come out as wonderful as this. Thank you for this lovely piece of smut. Here’s to Lena and Kara having even the Luthor mansion filled with children! Most importantly, though, I hope you’re starting to feel better 💙

Lovely piece, well worth waiting for. Just curious, what is it that Kara says in Kryptonese? On a personal note, hope you’re feeling better and have figured out what’s wrong. As someone who’s just come of the surgery table myself, you and I are sisters.

Good mom Lillian is a treat 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾loved this! I hope they have enough to field a sports team.

GrouchyGritic

Awesome work! Lillian is hilarious

Rocket

All I could think of when I saw the title was then nursery rhyme Patty Cake and hooo boy that sure got marked with a B for baby! Hope they don’t run out of L names for all those pups!


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