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Disobedience and Devotion - Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2021-03-20 14:48:02 +0000 UTC

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Absolutely spectacular finish! Thanks for sharing ;)

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH THAT WAS PERFECT!!!! FINALLY, THE "I LOVE YOUS" ~~~~ I AM DECREASED! This story was everything T_T pls write a sequel or more! I EXPECT CHILDREN! MULTIPLE. thank you so much for creating and sharing this (and all your fics ❤️) it was an experience and I loved every second of it ❤️❤️

Yes indeed, Lockwood was due an ass kicking. 💯I might have been saving the "I love you" moment for this since the very beginning of the story. Thank you so much! I'm excited to write a continuation about their growth as a couple in the future. I hope you're staying safe too!!! 💙❤️😺

So glad Lockwood got his ass kicked. That asshole would fight dirty. Poor Kara noble and honorable as always. Finally they told each other they loved each other. I really enjoyed this update. I love how free both Lena and Kara are now that they have expressed their love for each other. Can’t wait until Lena gives birth and Kara becomes even more enamored with Lena and their baby. Phenomenal update. Hope you are staying safe. 😊❤️💙👍🏻

Thank you! It's really funny you should say that, because I've always imagined them having a female alpha and how it would lead Kara to reflect on her own situation growing up.

Wow, thank you, all of this makes me so happy and it's definitely helpful to hear that you and others would like to see more from this verse. I know at some point after finishing another fic, I have plans for at least a follow-up chapter, or a sequel (depending on what my brain supplies). These comments are honestly feeding my muse so much - thank you again!

Thank you! I really love writing this version of Lena and I'm not ready for the story to be over. It's kind of a soft end because I do have plans to continue it to tie up a few loose threads (and maybe unravel some more).

That's so cool to hear because after the last one I wasn't sure if this was going to be too predictable and therefore less entertaining, love confessions and all. I wrote this as a soft ending, because I care about the verse and I know I want to write a continuation with Lena's pregnancy and a few other things I had in mind, though it will be after I finish up another story. 😊I definitely want to cover everything you mention, and it may develop into a sequel. Thank you so much!!

Thank you very much!

I can confirm that eventually there will be more about their growing family, and also some other stuff that I left slightly unresolved with respect to Kara. 😺Thank you! Hopefully it all seemed like they coming full circle.

Loved this! Can’t help but wonder what Kara would do if her child was a female alpha. What choices she would give or what laws may she try to change.

Echoing some of the other comments, this chapter would be a lovely ending but I’d be ecstatic to see more from this universe. The structure of everything just worked so perfectly and felt really natural yet exciting. This whole story has been paced amazingly and you continue to astound me with your writing! Absolutely loved it and I can’t wait to see what is in store next for this fic and your other works! 👏🏻

WildSolace

My god, that was crazy good Lena is so thirsty and feisty and I love that they finally admitted they love each other. It was perfect. Hope there is more, but if not this was definitely a good place to end.

Rocket

The whole fight had me so on edge! You know it’s good stuff when even though you know how it’s gunna turn out you’re still so nervous. And what a confession! This feels like such a lovely ending for this story but I can’t help but hope there’s going to be at least one more of this. Seeing them finally happy and settled with the family they’ve made would be absolutely perfect - and we gotta know if Lena’s carrying twins or not! That little tease has been haunting me ever since Alex threw it out there. Great work!!

GrouchyGritic

Awesome work!

Girl this had my heart pounding! I was on pins. Shoutout to Nia for coming through with the come through! This feels like a good ending but I do hope we’ll get an epilogue about the baby(ies 😏). Loved it! Loved the public fucking, so on brand for them.


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