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While We Watch - Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2021-08-26 20:08:07 +0000 UTC

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Lena is going to be pissed they hurt Kara. Thanks for sharing ;)

Thank you very much! This was actually one of the earlier stories I wrote, but I took a while before posting it. Going to try to get through editing the rest so I can wrap it up soon. 😁I'm glad you enjoyed the cliffhanger... it seemed like a good place to end the scene before an upcoming shift.

You'll find out what the audience thinks eventually! 😊

Stray thought- I wonder what the audience thinks of Kara retaliating.

What an interesting premise for a story. I just read all 6 chapters of this and I must say it’s intelligent and interesting. I’m looking forward see to how this all works out. Loved the fact that Kara retaliated against the guards. What a cliffhanger

I know it's a cliffhanger, but the next part comes with a big shift & feels like it kind of just goes on... until the end. So I need to figure out how I want to break it up and stuff and probably add some bridges or whatever. Thank you!, I'm glad you love all of that and umm, I can't tell you how it ends but you'll find out soon! 👀

Yeah, the people they're dealing with aren't good people and Kara has realized just what kind of threat Lena is under. That's a very interesting theory! Honestly, I'm glad you're finding it compelling and enjoying it. I wasn't so sure about posting this one, especially since we're living in a dystopian AU right now, and I appreciate hearing your thoughts. Thank you!

That's awesome - thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed all of the chapters so far! More soon -- I just need to like... edit, and see if there's anything I want to change.

Dudeeeeee how could you stop there??? I have anxiety 😬😬😬😬. As usual the sex was scorching. I just love their chemistry in this one. But I gotta say I need kara and crew to bust them out so they can fuck and breed in peace and private enshallah 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾

Rocket

Kara looks about ready to storm the castle and I don’t blame her one bit. The spike in Lena makes me wonder if what really would help would be a bite instead of just a knot but who knows!! That’s why we read to find out! That and you make it so compelling it’s hard to not! Can’t wait for the next bit!!

I don’t know why, I just noticed this story and literally read all six chapters ummm I’m loving this Kara isn’t playing 👀😩 I can’t wait for another update


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