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AΩ - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2021-11-21 00:31:14 +0000 UTC

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Thank you! I loved getting to do the world building for this one! 😁

Your ability to create three-dimensional universes is truly incredible! Thanks for sharing ;)

Thank you! There is more coming soon! 😊

It is, yes! 😊

I feel like there's a lot of room in this verse to do a lot of creative things and make the ABO-verse much vaster, so to speak. Nyxly is a complicated character in the show and I went back and forth as to which character I'd pick to be Kara's handler. I chose her over other options because of the depth the show actually gave her before the end of the season, and I definitely want to add that depth for this story. Thank you!!!

Aww, that's so cool, thank you! Yeah, Kara still has an inner spaz in this one, despite all of her abilities in the arena. 😂 Nyxly's role in everything is going to be really interesting, along with Andrea's hold over Lena. This will be an enjoyable one to write, but I'm especially looking forward to writing Kara's POV and her transformations over the course of the fic. ❤️💙

Thank you! Funny story - originally Lena was going to be more of a meek soul in this one. Now she's not. 😂

I haven't personally read a fic in 4 or 5 years, but hopefully someone else here knows and I'll try to ask my friend who is an avid fic reader. Best of luck in finding it!

Yay, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and you're looking forward to more! 😁Thank you!

😁 Thank you!!! I'm pumped to write more, especially with all of the fun different elements to explore!

I'm super excited about the power structure and the dynamics of all of that. I think I only mentioned 6 of the tiers so far and some of their traits, but yeah there will be 7 with the last being different/kinda interesting! 😊 This will be an ongoing story for a while if the top tier patron decides it to be such, but I'm really so excited and I've come up with loads of ideas for it, so we'll see where it all takes us. Omegas aren't servants in this verse. There is a particular benefit of having pups that will be mentioned soon. Answering the rest might spoil stuff... 👀 And I agree with you about Nyxly! I didn't know how I felt about her at the start of the season, but I actually really like her layers as a character and there were so many better ways they could have dealt with her character than what they did in the end. It was abrupt and dumb. Lmao, yeah, Lena was kind of like, "okay you did your thing, adios!" I'm excited to write Kara's POV and stuff too. Thank you!!!

Thank you! I'm pretty excited for this one, both Kara and Lena's developments and the roles of their respective keepers (Nyxly and Andrea). It's going to be an interesting mix for me to write, with Ancient Roman/Grecian elements and modern world stuff. 😁 I have seen Spartacus before, the show and the film. Definitely inspired by a lot of action films for writing the arena scenes. So happy you're invested in the story and I hope you have a lovely day & nice Thanksgiving with your family! Stay safe and well! 😊❤️💙

Thank you so much! There will be more of the story to come! 😊

Oooooh is this an ongoing fic?? 😱👀

There's just something about this that keeps me coming back. Third time I've read it and I feel like I'm diving into a whole new universe of potential. You've got this perfect balance of malice and benevolence with Nyxly, like I can feel how unhinged she is reading it. I feel like we'll never know which side might show itself and that keeps me on edge in such a good way. Thank you for always writing things I didn't know I needed that I then can't get enough of!

I mean really 👀😩... Definitely needed more !!! re-reading this story had me fall in love with this story Love how Kara tried to keep her Alphanisim when it came to Lena but then she lost it once she was cornered in the bathing room 🤣 poor Kara her trying to escape Nxyly having the rights to Lena's womb scares me but I can't wait for more this story....I can't wait to see how Kara's going to be Once she become's a sire to their pups

This is completely unrelated but could someone please help me find a specific fic? The plot revolves around Kara (I think in a abo universe and some sort of royalty) with Lena as her concubine or mistress. Karas married to Lucy lane, but refuses to sleep with her. Kara only sleeps with Lena and is first extremely rude but begins to realise she cares for her. Fast forward they begin having relations and Lucy is hella jealous and tries to injure Lena for stealing her wifes affection. I’ve been looking for this fic EVERYWHERE and I found one that’s pretty similar to it (the concubine by daughterofel) but I know for sure the story I’m referring to has Lucy as the wife instead of Siobhan. Does anyone know what I’m talking about?? I’m desperate. Have I somehow mixed a few fics together?? PLEASE comment if you know lmao

Blake

i love this already especially how lena is written especially! although it may be seen as a mask, i love how lena is so forward

This is going to be another great, interesting read. I’m definitely on board. I think it’s going to be a wonderful ride 😁

This is a very interesting dynamic for sure. I’m already hooked and can’t wait to see what happens. Absolutely outstanding story telling as always 😊

Rocket

I’ve read this thing twice now I’m so captivated by it. This concept of a difference in power structure (SEVEN TIERS??? WOW) from the norm but also just the gladiator aspect in general has me pressing my face against the metaphorical glass of this world wanting to know EVERYTHING! Are omega’s just servants? What’s the benefit of having pups for your alphas for the house? Is Andrea lying to Lena about keeping the pups??? And Nxyly as the villain this time around hell yeah!! If there’s one thing the final season did for us it’s give us some fresh antagonist (thank god). Really really interested to see where this one goes not only plot wise but also character wise (Lena being so slinky yet a total ice Queen at the end!! And Kara so jaded and cynical!) absolutely cannot wait!

Holy hell this was so good and captivating. I already love how Lena showed Kara she’s not just some fragile omega but she can hold her own. I really hope Lena is right and she gets to keep their pups. This is definitely going to be one interesting story and I can’t wait to read how this all plays out. This kind of reminds me of the show Spartacus. If that’s what you were going for you definitely nailed this. I’m totally digging this story consider me hooked, lined and sunk. Hope you are staying safe and are doing well 😊👍🏻👍🏻💙❤️

Fantastic storytelling. I hope these two break free almost as much as I hope for more of this story. Thank you for sharing.


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